Artistic??

[Blue Dolphin]

Looks like I am wasting my time posting here
so
have fun ppl
be well, be safe
BD

 

[kikmosa]

Looks like I am wasting my time posting here
so
have fun ppl
be well, be safe
BD

How can it be a waste of time to share, BD? But if this is the way you feel then I'm sorry to see you go. I'll miss you and your poems. Be happy.

 

[kikmosa]

How can it be a waste of time to share, BD? But if this is the way you feel then I'm sorry to see you go. I'll miss you and your poems. Be happy.

I've looked back over the thread and I've noticed that I'm posting more then any other here. I didn't mean to take over this thread and I apoligize. I'm going to withdraw now and leave it to all of you. I'll stil come in and lurk but I will no longer post. I'm sorry, BD, if I made you feel unnoticed. I won't let it happen again. Goodbye.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Chasing Whales


by Blue Dolphin ©


Maybe that I should go chase whales
listen to them sing
Soar, as lonely albatross
Aloft the ocean wing

Maybe that I should ride the breeze
be grey cloud filled with rain,
and feel, as grieving teardrops,
try there diminish pain

This love that eat my very soul,
and cut you to the core.
All I do is cause you pain,
yet could not love you more

How my sorrow fills me empty,
devoid of happiness,
until again I hold you
your gentle face caress


Maybe that I should go chase whales,
or maybe, stay right here
to hold you close, to kiss you,
and whisper, in you ear

“Darling one, I could never leave
would break my heart in two,
forever and for always,
will be here, loving you”

 

[kikmosa]

Chasing Whales


by Blue Dolphin ©


Maybe that I should go chase whales
listen to them sing
Soar, as lonely albatross
Aloft the ocean wing

Maybe that I should ride the breeze
be grey cloud filled with rain,
and feel, as grieving teardrops,
try there diminish pain

This love that eat my very soul,
and cut you to the core.
All I do is cause you pain,
yet could not love you more

How my sorrow fills me empty,
devoid of happiness,
until again I hold you
your gentle face caress


Maybe that I should go chase whales,
or maybe, stay right here
to hold you close, to kiss you,
and whisper, in you ear

“Darling one, I could never leave
would break my heart in two,
forever and for always,
will be here, loving you”

Thank you Bd. Goodbye.

 

[Marilyth]

I'm really confused here.

The point of the thread was for people to post anything they felt they saw as creative. Anything from poems, stories, photography, art, whatever. It is not meant for someone to be critiqued or criticized. I personally don't have time to come through and thank everyone personally for posting, or critique every poem. I appreciate everyone that posts, I just can't come in and say it everyday for every poster.

I'm sorry that people are feeling "left out" but this is not high school. This is a message board. Those who have time and the opportunity to post, I VERY much encourage it!! Those who do not, that's ok too.

Please don't presume that you are coming in and hijacking a thread, especially if the initiator (THAT IS ME GUYS), tells you that you are. And I'm here to say you aren't.

If you don't like what goes on here, don't come here. It's your choice to click on the link. I love it when people come and post things, but do NOT come in here and alienate someone, just because you feel like you're not being paid attention to. That's just childish.

With that, if people want to continue to post, that's great! Please do so. If I've pissed someone off saying this, so be it. Right now I'm upset that people think they have the right to say mean things to others in MY thread, dammit!!!

I wanted to see cool creative things, and now that's been spoiled by a single person. Thank you!!

Thank you Bd. Goodbye.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Thank you Bd. Goodbye.

KIKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
dont you dare leave
I posted poem, then had to go offline
just got back
very sad
please
return
BD

 

[poundemin]

It seems that we all jumped the gun on this one. I, for one, sent kiki a pm not to leave the thread, thinking that bd had chased her off. It seems that I made a misjudgement on that. For that I apologize, but it didn't sound right to me and I wanted things back the way they were.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Kiki
please accept my most humble apology for hurting you
that was never my intention
and do not leave
if you go, I feel duty bound to join you
and dont think either of us wants that
please
return
BD

going to bed now
please be here when I return

 

[IrishWolfhound]

A friend pointed this thread out to me (thanks Hornymama). As my non-erotic poetry never seems to get read on my submissions, I thought I'd try this one out here. Feed back would be appreciated.

I saw you for an instant...
Then you were gone.
Your faint trace left behind
I called out to your ghost.

Will you be there
When I next I call
Or run into the mists
Never to return?

Am I of your past
Or future,
Does your soul
Still answer mine?

Or do other songs
now call you
To dance beneath
The shining stars?

My love answer now
My heart song.
Dance with me
On frosted fields.

(Originally sent as an e-mail to a certain lady.)

 

[kikmosa]

Please, I didn't mean to start all of this. I just wanted to back off and give others a chance. I'm so sorry for upsetting everyone. Please don't be mad at each other, please.

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Please, I didn't mean to start all of this. I just wanted to back off and give others a chance. I'm so sorry for upsetting everyone. Please don't be mad at each other, please.

Not mad at you love
just want you back


for you


Soft Eyes

by Blue Dolphin ©

Soft eyes, that now impale my heart
caressing, with a glance.
Kindle there a memory,
an afternoon of chance

Swirling tongue, on a rosebud pink
slow moving, side to side
soft eyes dilated dreamy,
escape primeval cry

Engulfed within her cherry lips,
seduced, erotic guile,
tasting there her ecstasy,
soft eyes, orgasmic smile.

 

[Marilyth]

I like it! I'm a lover of modern poetry that people come up with. I'd like to know your inspiration. It seems that it may be a sad time. I wish I could word my poems to make sense to bring out feelings. Mine tend to be more abstract.

Thanks so much for posting!

A friend pointed this thread out to me (thanks Hornymama). As my non-erotic poetry never seems to get read on my submissions, I thought I'd try this one out here. Feed back would be appreciated.

I saw you for an instant...
Then you were gone.
Your faint trace left behind
I called out to your ghost.

Will you be there
When I next I call
Or run into the mists
Never to return?

Am I of your past
Or future,
Does your soul
Still answer mine?

Or do other songs
now call you
To dance beneath
The shining stars?

My love answer now
My heart song.
Dance with me
On frosted fields.

(Originally sent as an e-mail to a certain lady.)

 

[kikmosa]

For my friends......

Shadow Rose

In solitude and shadow
There stands a single rose
It’s petals etched in purest red
A blush within its folds

A drop of morning dew
Runs softly down its curves
Tracing each faint line
In it’s travel to the heart

Alone it stands
Seen by none
N’er kissed by the sun
Enfolded by the shadow

Yet despite it’s solitude
It blooms and glows
For even in the shadow
Beauty can survive

 

[Blue Dolphin]

For my friends......

Shadow Rose

In solitude and shadow
There stands a single rose
It’s petals etched in purest red
A blush within its folds

A drop of morning dew
Runs softly down its curves
Tracing each faint line
In it’s travel to the heart

Alone it stands
Seen by none
N’er kissed by the sun
Enfolded by the shadow

Yet despite it’s solitude
It blooms and glows
For even in the shadow
Beauty can survive

beautiful my love
just beautiful
BD

 

[poundemin]

I liked it. I really did. And I'm glad your back.

 

[IrishWolfhound]

I like it! I'm a lover of modern poetry that people come up with. I'd like to know your inspiration. It seems that it may be a sad time. I wish I could word my poems to make sense to bring out feelings. Mine tend to be more abstract.

Thanks so much for posting!

The inspiration, oddly, was a quirk of the internet. My lady & I kept missing each other on line that night. Sometimes her icon stays up after she has logged off (her ghost), and I try to pm her.

The sadness...only from missing my lady love.

 

[kikmosa]

Stand of Freedom

She stands in lonely solitude
Guarding the entrance to our world
Stanch and stern yet welcoming
Her torch held high in pride

Humanity pours in steady streams
Around her ragged skirts
They gaze upon her steadfast visage
And stand in silent awe

Weather-beaten still she stands
Worn yet never faltering
This symbol of our nation
Lights the freedom way

 

[SecretScribe]

I'm in love you ...
Hold my breath till I turn blue ...
If I can't have your heart ...
Gonna scream and shout and fart ...

NG made me do this ... it's not my fault ... really ...

 

[naughtygirl]

I'm in love you ...
Hold my breath till I turn blue ...
If I can't have your heart ...
Gonna scream and shout and fart ...

NG made me do this ... it's not my fault ... really ...

I have no idea what he's talking about!

Isnt he cute?! I told him everyone appreciates some silliness now and then!

 

[Marilyth]

Yes we do! And it is well worth the read HEHE

I have no idea what he's talking about!

Isnt he cute?! I told him everyone appreciates some silliness now and then!

 

[kikmosa]

Beauty is in the eye
Of the beholder they say
Yet each eye beholds
Beauty in very different ways

What one calls beauty
Another passes by
Without a second glance
Choosing instead another

This thing called art
Stands this way
For some its beauty
For others junk

A painting drawing an eye here
A sculpture catching attention there
Abstract or real life
Color or black and white

Metal, wood, carved or plain
Glass, canvas, stone, ceramic
Each appeals to someone
For art is beauty to each in some way

 

[kikmosa]

This is too good a thread for it to sit on the back page. There has to be a lot of people with a lot of talent out there. It doesn't matter what it is. Marilyth said pictures, carvings, stories, poems or whatever. Please help keep this thread alive.

 

[poundemin]

This is too good a thread for it to sit on the back page. There has to be a lot of people with a lot of talent out there. It doesn't matter what it is. Marilyth said pictures, carvings, stories, poems or whatever. Please help keep this thread alive.

Haven't been on for a couple of days and look what happens! With all the talent on here I would have thought that everyone would post something.
I'm still looking for stories for you. Buried deep somewhere, I guess.
P.S. The new avatar is my little boy.

 

[IrishWolfhound]

OK, something that I posted a long time ago on the GA thread. It kind of got lost in some events right after that, but the message is still true:

The Lady of Fire

I saw her there,
Off to my east
That Lady of fire and sunrises.

I ventured close
And felt her warmth
And basked briefly in her rays.

But I backed away,
Fearing Icarus’ fate.
Fly close, and you will fall.

But again and again
I have returned
Unable to rule my soul.

For having once
Felt her fire
You are forever enthralled.

Her touch causes need
Her taste creates hunger
Her voice kindles desire.

I will heed not the rocks
I will touch again the flames
That set my senses on fire.