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Wow! That was great. I love the ending. I read it three times. Makes me sad everytime I read it. Great work! do you always create your work that quickly?
 
thequietstorm said:
Wow! That was great. I love the ending. I read it three times. Makes me sad everytime I read it. Great work! do you always create your work that quickly?
Actually that was slow for me. I had a lot of stuff going on at the time. Once I sat down to write it only took about 10 minutes to write it. I'll try to write the others this morning before I go to work.
 
thequietstorm said:
This is a photo of the International Fountain, near the Space Needle in Seattle WA.
Water dancing round me
Thundering and splashing
Dancing through the air
Pulsing with the force
Of nature wild and free

It carries life and death
Both within it's embrace
It wears away at even
The stone, eroding them
And bringing to nothing
Until they are no more

It carries the seeds
Of mighty trees and
Spreads them in it's path
Changing all the land
To match it's vision
Of what should be

And yet it gives itself
To be used and toyed
With in ways it was not
Meant to do, it bends to
The will of man, or is
It really using man

Are we but taking it
To places it could not
Reach and giving it
A chance to do what
It would have had to
Wait centries to do

Or is it that even
In it's never ending
flowing, even water
Seeks to enjoy
Playing and is but
Using us to do so

None of this matters
As I stand beneath
The dancing waters
For what is will be
And wether we use
Or are being used

This is fun!!!!!!!!!!
 
thequietstorm said:
A shot of the Space Needle in Seattle WA.
Here stands a phallic
Offering unto the gods
Thrusting into the sky
Enticing god and goddess
To pierce themselves
Upon it's spikiness

A salute to what
We wish to explore
The hidden depths
Of space, waiting for
Our embrace, wanting
To be plundered

We tremble like
A virgin, wanting
This and yet afraid
Can we take this
Final step and join
The cosmic dance

For now we but
Lift up our offering
Waiting until the
Time is right, and
Then we will plunge
Into the depths

Rushing headlong
To sate our pleasure
Thrusting ever deeper
Until at last we explode
And spread our seed
To bring forth life
 
thequietstorm said:
This is a picture from a 3D application that creates landscape scenes. The app is called Bryce.
As evening draw near
A cooling mist lifts
From the earth
To cloak all in it's
Chill embrace

The last flickers of
The passing sun
Flow across the
Sleepy land as
Night envelops all

Here stands a tree
Gathering the sun's
Warmth into itself
Covering up with
A firey blanket

There a stone
Visage basks in
Heat, storing it in
preperation for the
Long night ahead

Night firms it's
Grip upon the land
As day withdraws
Darkness spreads
And silence falls

The life of day
Slowly drifts off
To sleep giving
The nightlife a
Free hand for now

But morning will
Return and then
The earth will wake
And once more bask
In the sun's warmth
 
Why not talk of love

Can you hear them on the streets?
Can you hear them in the homes?
Those angry words they speak
They just go on and on
I hear them on the TVS.
I see them in the news
I wish that they would go away
And just let me be

Why can’t people
speak of only love
Why does hate
have to be
Why not speak
of things that should be
Why not talk of love

Can you see the blows still falling
upon our ragged souls
Can you see me stagger
as hatred takes its toll
I know that there is
a better way for us
The anger is killing us
But they just won’t see

Why can’t people
speak of only love
Why does hate
have to be
Why not speak
of things that should be
Why not talk of love

This world is slowly dieing
as hatred rules the day
But we can turn it round
if you’ll stand up and say

Why can’t people
speak of only love
Why does hate
have to be
Why not speak
of things that should be
Why not talk of love
 
Please, people, this thread is too good to die. Help me to keep it alive.
 
I agree, kiki. But I'm afraid the muse is on vacation. The creative juices have not flowed of late. Sorry.
 
And then, of a sudden, the muse drops in.

The Need

My soul is aching once again
To hold her close, to touch her skin
To taste her lips and breathe her scent.

I need to lay in her arms
I need to rest my head on her
I need her touch

I want to feel her next to me in the dark
I want her warmth where I can feel it
I want to watch her sleeping, by candle light

To wake with her and walk with her
To spend long hours exchanging thoughts
And as many hours in silent sharing.
 
IrishWolfhound said:
And then, of a sudden, the muse drops in.

The Need

My soul is aching once again
To hold her close, to touch her skin
To taste her lips and breathe her scent.

I need to lay in her arms
I need to rest my head on her
I need her touch

I want to feel her next to me in the dark
I want her warmth where I can feel it
I want to watch her sleeping, by candle light

To wake with her and walk with her
To spend long hours exchanging thoughts
And as many hours in silent sharing.
This is beautiful. So expressive. Wish I could write this well.
 
IrishWolfhound said:
Thank you kiki...but you are too modest, I think. I find your work very expressive.
Here lately I've taken to writing frivolous things. Some of my stuff got found at work (someone read my notebook while I was in the ladies room) and they were a bit upset by some of it. They said I need help or to be committed. So I write silly stuff for them to read so they'll leave me alone.
 
kikmosa said:
Please, people, this thread is too good to die. Help me to keep it alive.

I'm so impatient for my digicam, that's where my creativity lies. I still love coming in and reading, so I agree... keep trying.

:) Thanks guys!! :)
 
hey marilyth- i have pics of some stuff ive done, but i cant get them on here cus theyre to big i guess.. do you know how to downsize a photo in photoshop? ive saved it as a gif, and it still wont fit.. any help and ill post my stuff on here :)

s
 
st4nton said:
hey marilyth- i have pics of some stuff ive done, but i cant get them on here cus theyre to big i guess.. do you know how to downsize a photo in photoshop? ive saved it as a gif, and it still wont fit.. any help and ill post my stuff on here :)

s
Save it as a jpeg and go to image. There should be a resize tab there. Click it and select the next size down. When you save it again, change the name by adding a letter or number to it so that it won't replace your original. See if it's small enough then. If not then downsize it again.
 
base here is pages from the bible w/ a drawing i did glued on top..then glass peices glued over that.. w/ a black border..theres three of these.
 
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