Artistic??

[kikmosa]

Hope ya'll dont mind some of my mindless drivel here. Its not at all spectacular, but it is my thoughts on paper.
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Drowning

Out of control
Losing myself
Desperate.
Crashing deep
Fallen angel
Lost.
Boundaries gone
Spirit broken
Pain.
Scared little girl
Dancing feet
Tears.
Love hurts
Scars cry
Sleep.
Passion lures
Feverish lust
Forsaken.
Staring blindly
Mindless battles
Numb.
Craving touch
Aching souls
Drowning.

©Jewelz 7/'02

It's beautiful, Jewelz, but so sad. I can feel the pain your in from your words. I so wish I could help you to see the joy in the world but I'm still finding it myself. (((((((((((Jewelz)))))))))))

 

[Jewelz]

It's beautiful, Jewelz, but so sad. I can feel the pain your in from your words. I so wish I could help you to see the joy in the world but I'm still finding it myself. (((((((((((Jewelz)))))))))))

Thank you darlin. It was written at one of my low days. I just write what my heart feels at time. I find that when I am most sad is when I write the best. And alot of my poetry has that hint of melancoly about it. (((((((((((((((((kiki)))))))))))))))))))

Thank you too Sunnygirl!

 

[kikmosa]

Crashing Deep

Sleepless, I lay yearning
Trapped inside your soul.
Aching to feel the slightest touch
A kiss so powerful, I lose control.
Feverish and unyielding
Crashing deep inside of you.
Passion igniting my heart
The flames all brand new.
Body trembles, moisture seeps
Tears faintly falling.
Bound together forever more
Spirits crawling.
Taste the depths of my being
Chase the moon tonight.
Dance among the stars with me
Hold me close, everything's just right.
Your eyes lost in mine
Sacred caresses capture me.
A hunger consumes my body
Sensuality set free.
Carry me forever deep
Hold on to tomorrow's dream.
Reach out to me, complete me
Your heart's fury redeemed.

©Jewelz- May 2002

*sigh* mmmmmmm......yeah....

 

[Jewelz]

Surrender All

You've taken me to places
Where only dreams come true.
You've danced into my soul
Making my spirit whole.
Eyes of sweet deliverance
Breath of innocence
Raptures around me
Intentions lost.
Charming, delightful
Serenity's gaze
Surrender all.
Take my hand, lead me home
Keep me your sacred one.
Profound the lover's words
Spoken but a moment's glance.
Entranced, deliberate cause
Weakened in the heart
Steal away the night
Kiss upon the stars
Listen to the music of us
Created beauty
Everlasting electricity.
Surrender all.
Gone. With desire.

©Jewelz

 

[kikmosa]

oh Jewelz, that brings to mind just one word.....


WOW

 

[Jewelz]

oh Jewelz, that brings to mind just one word.....


WOW

oh *blush* thank you sweetie!

 

[John Roberts]

Jewelz, I am not a real fan of poetry unless it is well crafted even though I write a little, but that was really nice

JR

 

[John Roberts]

Great stuff.

Okay after reading through more of the thread I have to say there is a lot of talent here, I really am enjoying everyone's work.
Thank you all for sharing.

JR

 

[SecretScribe]

In the autumn of the desert
I found springtime growing there.
I came with hope abiding
To find a love sweet and fair.

It was to be a moment
Restricted to only us two.
Yet in the end it passed
That it created something new.

The road is long and hard
That leads from Taos town,
But I will follow where it leads
To darkness or to lacy gown.

The future is the great unknown
Though perception I would gain,
Destiny calls and I respond,
Hoping for love beyond all pain.

I cast the die across the felt,
I cast my soul as well.
My hope, my desire shout aloud
That together we will dwell.

 

[Jewelz]

Jewelz, I am not a real fan of poetry unless it is well crafted even though I write a little, but that was really nice

JR

Thank you JR...I am glad that some people enjoy my heart on paper

 

[John Roberts]

Here is another poem of mine....it is not happy but it expresses the feelings of loss pretty well.....

Sister Night

Life nurtures and tears us down.
Love found and love lost.
The blindness brought by despair
brings to sight nothing but darkness.
I reach for the sun but the clouds and rain
chill my soul colouring the light gray,
happiness is someone else's reality.
Breathe life into me my love
let me bask in your glow.
Let joy take us however briefly
before slipping quietly into the night.
The abyss beckons, stark, cold and dark.
No light reaches there, no hope
Love abandoned, friendship lost
lying in a pit of our devising
the light up there appears farther
and farther away.
A beautiful face, a kind word falls on ears
going deaf and eyes that can no longer see
the beauty of the world.
Take me sister night, infold me into your loving arms and silence my crying heart.

Copyright JR

 

[John Roberts]

And of course I should not leave you with a bad taste in your mouth. Something a little lighter.

The bed beckons the sleepy one to sleep
drawn to delicious dreams the eyes close
softness of breathing the world recedes
farther and farther away the trials of life
until the gentle unconciousness spreads
its healing hands stroking the body and limbs
and troubled brow to a relaxed world of
bliss. The dreams begin of wonderous worlds
of flight and magical feats the impossible becomes real
lovers found, no adversity around nothing is denied
the dreamer has found her restful home of peace
and loving arms

Copyright JR

 

[Marilyth]

Here is one of my watercolors... and yes, I am a beginner! (so be nice!)

I LIKE it! I can only do things like that with paint by number

 

[Marilyth]

I am so happy that you all have decided to share your talents with us! I love the artwork and the poetry! I look forward to seeing more.

I really wish the internet had worked earlier today, maybe I wouldn't be as homesick as I am right now.

Jewelz: you poems really hit home with me right now. It's like a window to my soul. Thank you!

JR & Kiki: wow! Kiki, I wish I could do what you do. Instead of drawing, you're able to extract feeling from what you interpret in a piece of artwork. I hope you're keeping these things in your own book. I think you should compile them and submit them to a publisher. That's the English/creative writer speaking

I know I'm forgetting someone. I think it's Scribe. I love your av to go with the poem. Wonderful!!

Thank you all!!!

 

[naughtygirl]

Dream...beautiful watercolors and poetry...

KiKi...you are so talented and so quick about it. Such a beautiful soul you carry within you.

Jewelz...as always you write from your heart...and its amazing...sad at moments..but beautiful all on its own just the same.

BD and JR-- you are extremely talented! I have enjoyed reading your works. Amazing.

 

[naughtygirl]

In the autumn of the desert
I found springtime growing there.
I came with hope abiding
To find a love sweet and fair.

It was to be a moment
Restricted to only us two.
Yet in the end it passed
That it created something new.

The road is long and hard
That leads from Taos town,
But I will follow where it leads
To darkness or to lacy gown.

The future is the great unknown
Though perception I would gain,
Destiny calls and I respond,
Hoping for love beyond all pain.

I cast the die across the felt,
I cast my soul as well.
My hope, my desire shout aloud
That together we will dwell.

Its beautiful, my love. You are my hope.

 

[DreamOfSun]

In the autumn of the desert
I found springtime growing there.
I came with hope abiding
To find a love sweet and fair.

It was to be a moment
Restricted to only us two.
Yet in the end it passed
That it created something new.

The road is long and hard
That leads from Taos town,
But I will follow where it leads
To darkness or to lacy gown.

The future is the great unknown
Though perception I would gain,
Destiny calls and I respond,
Hoping for love beyond all pain.

I cast the die across the felt,
I cast my soul as well.
My hope, my desire shout aloud
That together we will dwell.

Beautiful poem, SS.

NG, I think he is a keeper!

 

[Guest]

DaVinci

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Hope

by Blue Dolphin ©

Waiting
watching and hoping
will she be here soon, will she see me?
If she does, will she hide,or stay?
dare I speak, say hi maybe

Afraid
If I say too much, will she leave,say sorry,I gotta go.
wanting to reach out, let my mind encircle her,but....

she seems afraid of me,wont let me get too close.
Is it I,or her feelings that scare her?
Does she have them, or am I the just the friend she needs?
The shoulder, the confidant.

Wondering
Why is she like a permanenet rosebud?
Petals enclosing the heart, never revealing,showing,freeing.
Will she open one day, tell me, or is this all it will ever be?

Dreaming
Holding her, hear her whisper my name
Kiss her
sit quietly through the night
just happy
being together


Loving
a one way street
yet there is no turn here
I have to stay
go on
maybe one day we will reach the freeway
cruise together
until then...........
i stay

I hope
and I love
with all my heart

 

[SecretScribe]

In the night I heard you calling
Out a name with fear and fright.
I came to you to ease your pain
And bring you to the light.

You were nought but the kindest friend
That asked of me a boon.
And I desired nothing more of you
Than to see you smiling soon.

I did what you asked, seeking answers,
Finding facts, bringing bring peace to you.
I learned so much about you then,
My mind was set askew.

And so the wheel of fate
was set to turn once more.
Where once your friendship called to me,
I felt a new rapport.

My heart so long forgotten
Stirred from its lengthy rest.
From such a small emotion
Rose a mighty crest.

So now I stand upon a windy plain.
No reference point in sight.
But I know the way that I must go,
to seek my heart's delight.

It is dark now and has darkened more
in these days of gloom and doom.
But still I know that beyond this door
lies a love that shall ever bloom.

 

[naughtygirl]

SS -- You are truly amazing.

 

[Guest]

 

[kikmosa]

*sorry, I just felt the need to write this one. Please bear with me*

In the darkness of the night
There sounds the cry of a child
Alone, frightened, in pain
Abandoned to the night

A child born but hours hence
In secret birthed, to coldness
No warm hand to hold him close
No breast upon which to feed

A child unwanted by the world
Into which he was born
Unloved by she who bore him
Or he from who's loin he sprung

A life wasted by the foolish
A gift sent from above, tossed away
No heed paid by cold lifeless hearts
No thought for the cruelty

Weep, ye souls of the light
Cry for the life destroyed
No chance to love, to grow
Denied the right to be

Pray, ye souls of the light
That this soul in pain be freed
Loosed from this world of fear
Returned to the light of life

And weep for the souls
Who'll never know
The joy they threw away
For they too are lost tonight

As darkness consumes them all.

 

[Marilyth]

WOW! That is just amazing! It's like people are reading minds here! Very cool!!!

Since it has been voted on only three times I think it's safe to post one of my poems here. I just thought you'd like it Marilyth.



Literotica For Him: a poem for a new friend
by Indy_dark ©
With inspiration from Whispersecret.

My words are my bait
Thrown out to the sea
I entice her to read
I'm a writer you see

Perhaps it's the title
That catches her eye
Or something of interest
As she passes by

A graphic tale,
Juicy and lewd
Steamy and passionate
But I'm never crude.

I have slaved over this canvas
Painting thoughts with my pen
Mulling over each thought
And refining again

I am behind her now
My face buried deep
Spreading kisses
From her neck to her cheek

My hands on her hips
In a gentlemanly way
She arches her back,
It's ok if I stay

Can she sense what I am thinking?
Can she feel my desire?
When I cup her breast
Can she not feel the fire?

You are flirting with passion
You know that it's there
You are flooded with emotion
As you sit in your chair.

I know where you are tender
I know where to touch
The desire to expose
Has just gotten too much

Free yourself
Of the clothes that cover
Expose yourself
To the touch of your lover

Your fingers are tracing
and I'm watching you see
When you play with yourself
You are playing with me.

My hands are strong,
Yet soft when they find
Those erogenous zones
You have stowed in your mind.

I am strong, I am brave
But most of all true.
Here is your man
I sent him for you.

The pressure of your thumb
is really my nose.
those flicking fingers
where my tongue goes.

A shrill of delight
As her orgasm streams
Meet the man "in the dark"
I am the man of her dreams.

If I have done my job
I came alive in her soul
The piece she was seeking
To make her life whole

Whisper a secret
And tell me it's true
You were dreaming of me
When you were pleasuring you.

A digital thrill
Has made her life richer
But I am the real man
Who painted the picture.

 

[Marilyth]

Kiki, You've done yet another one that is very ... makes me speechless. I really wish I had your talent of prose and poetry. All of you who can make that look so easy!! I envy you

Thank you for continuing to post while I'm gone, temporarily. Training started this week for the new job, and I'm adjusting to going to bed early and getting up early, but I think I'm going to love it!

I also found out that the 'rents may be getting me a new digicam for Christmas...with an lcd screen...yay!! So... some creative photos may come from me sometime

Take care all!!

*sorry, I just felt the need to write this one. Please bear with me*

In the darkness of the night
There sounds the cry of a child
Alone, frightened, in pain
Abandoned to the night

A child born but hours hence
In secret birthed, to coldness
No warm hand to hold him close
No breast upon which to feed

A child unwanted by the world
Into which he was born
Unloved by she who bore him
Or he from who's loin he sprung

A life wasted by the foolish
A gift sent from above, tossed away
No heed paid by cold lifeless hearts
No thought for the cruelty

Weep, ye souls of the light
Cry for the life destroyed
No chance to love, to grow
Denied the right to be

Pray, ye souls of the light
That this soul in pain be freed
Loosed from this world of fear
Returned to the light of life

And weep for the souls
Who'll never know
The joy they threw away
For they too are lost tonight

As darkness consumes them all.