anal sex - oh Hell goes or God no!

[kitten00]

So what has been the feedback for anal stories on literotica? I'm working on a menage, and in 99% of menage (two men and a lady) stories that means DP. I'm assuming that this type of story would be well received in the group category?

What I find funny, is that most men dream about having two women share his bed...but can't fathom that some women have fantasies about having two men in hers!

thoughts?

yes, god yes

 

[jeninflorida]

I really don't see how you can't wrap your mind around that concept. Maybe you don't want to watch or read or write MMF, but it is a VERY established fantasy.

Although, there is probably an incestuous fellow who could say the exact same thing to me and my disbelief of incest-love.

oh I CAN get my mind around it. now, trying to write a story is something different. where to start the story? how much details about the characters lives does the reader want?

see "it" as a movie in my mind is no problem. the idea of a hot, steamy, sexy, erotic, and very pleasurable MFM is very hot!

its the classic, first page is the hardest to write. once some words appear on my computer screen things start to flow and glow. its the first 5 words that suck

does that make sense?
its late and I've had very little sleep

 

[jeninflorida]

ROFL! So true!

There's a bit of everything in my latest submission, Afternoon Foursome - partner switching, girl on girl, and some anal (though it's two guys - so make that gay sex )

Anyway, here's the story link:

http://www.literotica.com/s/afternoon-foursome

ha! glad we think alike! wow, your story sounds hot! I'll read it tomorrow

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

yes, god yes

Hell, yeah! Insert exaggerated West Virginia twang here.

 

[sweetguava]

So what has been the feedback for anal stories on literotica? I'm working on a menage, and in 99% of menage (two men and a lady) stories that means DP. I'm assuming that this type of story would be well received in the group category?

What I find funny, is that most men dream about having two women share his bed...but can't fathom that some women have fantasies about having two men in hers!

thoughts?

Yes!!

Double YES!

 

[scorallover]

oh I CAN get my mind around it. now, trying to write a story is something different. where to start the story? how much details about the characters lives does the reader want?

see "it" as a movie in my mind is no problem. the idea of a hot, steamy, sexy, erotic, and very pleasurable MFM is very hot!

its the classic, first page is the hardest to write. once some words appear on my computer screen things start to flow and glow. its the first 5 words that suck

does that make sense?
its late and I've had very little sleep

That is always my biggest issue. How far to explore the characters?

I run into with each story. My latest series I decided to go very deep in the characters lives. I don't know if that will turn people off or not, but I am just letting the story write itself.

On the sleep issue. I'm on some sort of sleep deprivation plan myself. I just hope that all the sleep I have missed the last two nights is in a bank somewhere because I'm going to want it back.

 

[HeyAll]

In terms of scores, it hurts more than it helps.

If people love anal, it'll just be a plus for them and you'll get a 5 anyway. But there are a few people who will literally leave comments saying the anal ruined it and they gave it a low score because of it.

But overall, in the story mentioned in the original post, it fits right in with what's going on so it should be left as is.

 

[MissBonita2012]

Anal sex isn't all that it's cracked up to be.

LOL . . . I love a good pun (or a bad one for that matter)

 

[jeninflorida]

yes, god yes

would you want the DP to be strangers?
are you okay with a loving couple inviting a man (but should it be a friend or stranger) to their bed for a dp?

 

[RodenAddison]

In terms of scores, it hurts more than it helps.

If people love anal, it'll just be a plus for them and you'll get a 5 anyway. But there are a few people who will literally leave comments saying the anal ruined it and they gave it a low score because of it.

But overall, in the story mentioned in the original post, it fits right in with what's going on so it should be left as is.

Maybe they're looking for the Disney version of the site.

 

[fuckwaffle]

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What I find funny, is that most men dream about having two women share his bed...but can't fathom that some women have fantasies about having two men in hers!

thoughts?

Yeah, what's up with that? Most men can hardly handle one women, let alone two at once and unless the two girls are good friends what is there to do once the guy pops his nut?

At least with two guys and a girl, the guys can take turns. While one rests, god fucked up on that one, the other can keep me...I mean the woman, rolling along on my...er, her, orgasm.

 

[estragon]

Just wrote some extensive Anal in my latest story, a parody of E. M. Forster's classic "A Passage to India". Didn't get bombed any worse than anything else I've posted on Lit. But it was posted as Humor & Satire, so I suspect the anti-Anal brigade doesn't spend a lot of time (or anything else) there.

Link is here. Let me know what y'all think.

http://www.literotica.com/s/a-back-passage-in-india

 

[jeninflorida]

Yeah, what's up with that? Most men can hardly handle one women, let alone two at once and unless the two girls are good friends what is there to do once the guy pops his nut?

At least with two guys and a girl, the guys can take turns. While one rests, god fucked up on that one, the other can keep me...I mean the woman, rolling along on my...er, her, orgasm.

I'm fine with it! in fact, think its very erotic!! hehe

 

[bbw4youngercocks1]

ha! glad we think alike! wow, your story sounds hot! I'll read it tomorrow

Vacations can inspire some of the wildest stories.

 

[3113]

Do the Men "indulge" with each other?

I'm surprised that only HeyAll has mentioned this, but the MMF is the problem, not the Anal or the group. Most readers are male, and they like their group to be FFM (I know you're shocked that men would love stories about a single guy with two women). That said, the most penetrating question (pun intended) is: do the men in your story do it? Because if they do, you may be in for some scathing comments and low scores. Typically, if the men do it (whether you post the story in Anal or Group), it "ruins" the story for male readers--who, apparently, all have nightmares of being anally raped by other men.

Maybe the times are changing and you'll get lucky, but you asked, and experience of other writers who have had MMF stories shows that most readers want any MM sex--with or without a female involved--in Gay Male.

Which, by the way, is where all the women who want to see such sex (with or with a female) will be looking for such a story. So if you find such hot, other female readers who find such hot are to be found reading stories in the Gay Male category. Just FYI. That's the results most MMF writers (especially with the males engaging with each other) have gotten in the past.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Again, we really need a bi category, or else modify the Group one to make it Group/Bisexual.

 

[3113]

Bisexual

Again, we really need a bi category, or else modify the Group one to make it Group/Bisexual.

Well, Stella mentioned that Laurel is looking into creating a bi-category. So that may be coming to us soon! And that would probably cover all bi-situations: group, anal, incest, etc.

Totally agree with you, by the bi There really should be that option so that Gay Male doesn't keep getting stuck with the MMF three-way which really isn't fair to Gay Male as a category. It's "bi" so let's have "Bi."

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Heck yeah. I could have put a couple of episodes of "A Treat Turns Tricks" into Bi and expanded Mordecai's action with the older men. If it gets implemented, I just might, though the time-frame is moving past that. Maybe Teddy will transform one of the next generation into an androgyne with universal desirability.

Transformation is fascinating. I'm going to start another one as soon as my back feels good enough to sit and type for more than 10-15 minutes at a time.

 

[jeninflorida]

Well, Stella mentioned that Laurel is looking into creating a bi-category. So that may be coming to us soon! And that would probably cover all bi-situations: group, anal, incest, etc.

Totally agree with you, by the bi There really should be that option so that Gay Male doesn't keep getting stuck with the MMF three-way which really isn't fair to Gay Male as a category. It's "bi" so let's have "Bi."

or at least a flag that tells people to expect bi male action as this is the #1 thing that turns some people off

I think most readers are okay with a DP scene, as long as the men don't have a sword fight

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Well, Stella mentioned that Laurel is looking into creating a bi-category. So that may be coming to us soon! And that would probably cover all bi-situations: group, anal, incest, etc.

Totally agree with you, by the bi There really should be that option so that Gay Male doesn't keep getting stuck with the MMF three-way which really isn't fair to Gay Male as a category. It's "bi" so let's have "Bi."

Bi all means.

 

[Boxlicker101]

Well, Stella mentioned that Laurel is looking into creating a bi-category. So that may be coming to us soon! And that would probably cover all bi-situations: group, anal, incest, etc.

Totally agree with you, by the bi There really should be that option so that Gay Male doesn't keep getting stuck with the MMF three-way which really isn't fair to Gay Male as a category. It's "bi" so let's have "Bi."

I suppose that would include any kind of group sex that includes MM or FF. I have a lot of those, most of them involving anal of some kind or another.

 

[bbw4youngercocks1]

Just finished my first full-length anal story and submitted it to Literotica. Don't know how long it will be before it's on the site, but wanted to give a head's up!

Just a teaser as to what to look for:

http://i45.tinypic.com/mwa620.jpg

 

[jeninflorida]

Just finished my first full-length anal story and submitted it to Literotica. Don't know how long it will be before it's on the site, but wanted to give a head's up!

Just a teaser as to what to look for:

http://i45.tinypic.com/mwa620.jpg

oh my, is it getting warm in here?

 

[Boxlicker101]

Just finished my first full-length anal story and submitted it to Literotica. Don't know how long it will be before it's on the site, but wanted to give a head's up!

Just a teaser as to what to look for:

http://i45.tinypic.com/mwa620.jpg

It will probably take abut five days from the time you submit it. Maybe longer, since you are new.

 

[voluptuary_manque]

Actually, Box, she isn't. Go check her stories. She's got a longer list than mine.