daveydarling
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I was browsing around the site this morning, and came across this story: http://www.literotica.com/s/just-a-cumrag-ch-01
It's the story of an oversexed young man, living at home, whose mother takes it upon herself to clean up all the cum he leaves around the house in the course of his chronic masturbation.
I found myself liking it, despite (or because) they didn't get to sex right away. There was a good bit of build up before they even touched each other... and yet I didn't hate the waiting, even with my head clouded with lusty thoughts, having just recently woken from dreaming.
A big plus was how well written this author is. He worked in a lot of smut, but the story is well edited, no words missing, grammar in all the right places, there was nothing to distract from envisioning the story.
Just thought I'd share my thoughts.
It's the story of an oversexed young man, living at home, whose mother takes it upon herself to clean up all the cum he leaves around the house in the course of his chronic masturbation.
I found myself liking it, despite (or because) they didn't get to sex right away. There was a good bit of build up before they even touched each other... and yet I didn't hate the waiting, even with my head clouded with lusty thoughts, having just recently woken from dreaming.
A big plus was how well written this author is. He worked in a lot of smut, but the story is well edited, no words missing, grammar in all the right places, there was nothing to distract from envisioning the story.
Just thought I'd share my thoughts.
