Morevinila
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I did - it still didn't work - according to my editor, it's because things happen in the story with two characters who are childhood friends. We had to clear all confusion that they are childhood friends but nothing sexual happened between them before they were 18. There never was anyway but just rewriting some sentences that might give that impression if read too quickly.I always put a disclaimer at the beginning, just so there’s no doubt that all characters are 18+.
It got there in the end: Impromptu Sex Beach Party.