Succubus vs rapists

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A private investigation agency is cover for a group of succubus, they hunt down rapists and suck out there life energy during sex killing them.

The story would start with a rapist who is aquited after he anally rapes a girl. His state does not consider anal rape to be rape.

Days after his Aquital he goes searching for his next victim. He picked up a girl in a club, but this time when he takes his cock out of her vagina and forces it in her ass against her will, the asshole consumes him. He dead now.
 
What state doesn't think anal rape is rape?

That aside I like the idea. Too bad I just finished wasting my horror quotient for a while.
 
What state doesn't think anal rape is rape?

That aside I like the idea. Too bad I just finished wasting my horror quotient for a while.

State law in New York defines rape as Vaginal. Oral and anal do not count.
 
I just finished one where its a coven of witches who hunted down the five men who gang raped their newest member and kill them in a brutal ritualistic style.

Personally I don't care who or what kills rapists as long as they die slowly and in great agony.
 
A private investigating agency is cover for a group of succubus. They hunt down rapists and suck out there life energy during sex killing them.

The story would start with a rapist who is aquited after he anally rapes a girl. His state does not consider anal rape to be rape.

Days after his Aquital he goes searching for his next victim. He picked up a girl in a club, but this time when he takes his cock out of her vagina and forces it in her ass against her will, the asshole consumes him. He dead now.
 
State law in New York defines rape as Vaginal. Oral and anal do not count.

True. However, it is still a third degree criminal sexual act, punishable by up to four years in prison. Only a totally incompetent prosecutor would go to trial on such a deeply flawed charging document.
 
I disagree


Succubi go for whatever the hell they want.

That's okay, guys. Everyone has their own opinion about succubi and anything else, but as a rape victim and having read a few succubus stories, I would not read, edit, or write a story where the succubus gets off or gets energy from a rapist, but that's me. I'm.sure there are certain stories you don't read as well for various reasons.

Loquere, what's the deal with you and LC? I think one comment about having him on ig would be enough...
 
I can only take that to mean you enjoyed being raped Lady Ver. Otherwise you'd be at the front of the line for a demon taking vengeance for you. Why don't you want vengeance?

Oh and Loq is one of our dimmer posters. He can't help it.
 
That's okay, guys. Everyone has their own opinion about succubi and anything else, but as a rape victim and having read a few succubus stories, I would not read, edit, or write a story where the succubus gets off or gets energy from a rapist, but that's me. I'm.sure there are certain stories you don't read as well for various reasons.

Loquere, what's the deal with you and LC? I think one comment about having him on ig would be enough...

Would they want the energy from the rapist? That depends on your theories on Succubi.

And Succubi do not always fuck their victims. They are capable of just flat out killing and I can imagine a rapist would be a "fun" victim for them

and energy is energy period.

I think you would like my witch story. Those bastards got theirs so bad they threw the story off of lit.
 
Wow. You must have done something really fucked up to get a story kicked of Lit. I know for a fact that being eaten alive isn't enough, what did you do make them eat their own flesh?
 
Wow. You must have done something really fucked up to get a story kicked of Lit. I know for a fact that being eaten alive isn't enough, what did you do make them eat their own flesh?

If you get deep into what I sent you, you will find out. Part of Dark genesis is that chapter.
 
I can only take that to mean you enjoyed being raped Lady Ver. Otherwise you'd be at the front of the line for a demon taking vengeance for you. Why don't you want vengeance?

Oh and Loq is one of our dimmer posters. He can't help it.

Sticks and stones
 
I can only take that to mean you enjoyed being raped Lady Ver. Otherwise you'd be at the front of the line for a demon taking vengeance for you. Why don't you want vengeance?

Oh and Loq is one of our dimmer posters. He can't help it.

Sean, we've had issues before, like when you don't like something I say, you think it gives you the automatic and divine right to call me a cunt. What you fail to see is, I'm assuming due to your youth, is that you're a misogynist, just like many of the men on the gb are. And like many men, deny it, or are proud of it.

Getting back to Loquere's story idea, I have no problem with reeking vengeance on rapists. The issue for me is, as a rape victim, is that I wouldn't want to touch a rapist, much less give him any kind of pleasure, especially sexual pleasure. Now, if the writer wants to have the rapist killed through castration, boiled in oil, crushed to death at Stonehenge by one of the monoliths, etc., I would probably go for that. And, for a succubus to get energy from killing a rapist via sex, just doesn't do it for me. It makes me think the succubus isn't too discriminating.

Loquere has his faults, but then who doesn't?
 
Would they want the energy from the rapist? That depends on your theories on Succubi.

And Succubi do not always fuck their victims. They are capable of just flat out killing and I can imagine a rapist would be a "fun" victim for them

and energy is energy period.

I think you would like my witch story. Those bastards got theirs so bad they threw the story off of lit.

The witch story sounds interesting. :) I hear what you're saying about energy. I just like to believe that some succubi are more discriminating. :)
 
Sean, we've had issues before, like when you don't like something I say, you think it gives you the automatic and divine right to call me a cunt. What you fail to see is, I'm assuming due to your youth, is that you're a misogynist, just like many of the men on the gb are. And like many men, deny it, or are proud of it.

Getting back to Loquere's story idea, I have no problem with reeking vengeance on rapists. The issue for me is, as a rape victim, is that I wouldn't want to touch a rapist, much less give him any kind of pleasure, especially sexual pleasure. Now, if the writer wants to have the rapist killed through castration, boiled in oil, crushed to death at Stonehenge by one of the monoliths, etc., I would probably go for that. And, for a succubus to get energy from killing a rapist via sex, just doesn't do it for me. It makes me think the succubus isn't too discriminating.

Loquere has his faults, but then who doesn't?

You'd have a point if I didn't call Vette, Busybody, Miles, Bot, and LJ twats and cunts all the time. But by all means call me a mysogynist. It doesn't actually hurt my feelings and even if I was I'd probably be proud of it. What's the point of being alive if you aren't proud of who and what you are.


You're logic still doesn't hold up though. Basically your saying you'd hate vampires that ate Hitler because that would soil them. They should instead feed on innocent Jews. That makes PERFECT sense.

The witch story sounds interesting. :) I hear what you're saying about energy. I just like to believe that some succubi are more discriminating. :)


See above.

Oh and at my worst and most trollish I don't have entire pages that are made up entirely of me responding to me. That a special level which you'd know if you were capable of thought.
 
You'd have a point if I didn't call Vette, Busybody, Miles, Bot, and LJ twats and cunts all the time. But by all means call me a mysogynist. It doesn't actually hurt my feelings and even if I was I'd probably be proud of it. What's the point of being alive if you aren't proud of who and what you are.


You're logic still doesn't hold up though. Basically your saying you'd hate vampires that ate Hitler because that would soil them. They should instead feed on innocent Jews. That makes PERFECT sense.

See above.

Oh and at my worst and most trollish I don't have entire pages that are made up entirely of me responding to me. That a special level which you'd know if you were capable of thought.

As usual, we'll have to agree to disagree. I don't care what you call other people. The fact that you call a woman an offensive word that derives from women's bodies is what I, and many other women, find offensive about this kind of name-calling. If you really believed what you said, you would be calling everyone you disagreed with a "prick" or "dickhead", etc. But using words that were derogatory towards women is apparently worse and therefore better than using male-derived words.
 
As usual, we'll have to agree to disagree. I don't care what you call other people. The fact that you call a woman an offensive word that derives from women's bodies is what I, and many other women, find offensive about this kind of name-calling. If you really believed what you said, you would be calling everyone you disagreed with a "prick" or "dickhead", etc. But using words that were derogatory towards women is apparently worse and therefore better than using male-derived words.

I agree, but im not one for using such simple minded forms of name calling. I'm more of a annoying propagandist!
 
I agree, but im not one for using such simple minded forms of name calling. I'm more of a annoying propagandist!

You speak, at last. :) Well, you do seem to favor tangeants, regardless of forum, and it's not out of the ordinary on Lit, although it could be seen as a conversation stopper.
 
I love the idea but I'd probably more go for a lone succubus as that entraps rapists. somehow I don't see succubi working well together. Not that I know this to be the case or anything. It just seems like it to me.


oh and...

This message is hidden because lovecraft68 is on your ignore list. 3345
You do realize that you're inflicting more annoyance on the rest of us than lovecraft himself when you continually do this, no?
 
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I don't see a good reason why succubi couldn't hunt as a pack. I always figured that Selma Hayek and the Dusk to Dawn pack were succubi and if not they were kinda piss poor vampires. In a modern city though a strip club should be able to easily provide enough food for a succubi.

The better question is why does an evil demon who feeds on people particularly care about punishing rapists when she's almost undebatably a bigger monster and in most mythology Succubi are born not made. If they were made like regular vampires it suddenly makes perfect sense. Woman is raped, woman survives, demon powers her up, she goes out hunting for revenge. It's simple and elegant. Of course the problem she ends up facing is ultimately the same one that "good" vampires usually face sooner or later is their morality is sufficiently blue and orange (vs Black and White) that they start being able to justify some rather bizzare stuff. I can easily see say Minnie Mouse deciding that using rude terms towards women equals hating all women and that justifies a kill, or a jock who didn't consider a girls feelings before absently saying something to one of her friends is worthy of death.

It's something that's occasionally brought up in superhero forums that once you're Batman, Spiderman or Buffy and you go out each and every night LOOKING for trouble that your no longer practicing self defense. You can make a case the people you beat deserved it but not that you were defending yourself when you could have stayed home.

And yes I'm sure Loq knows he's more disruptive than LC. Oh well.
 
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