Incesteous Superhero Story idea

[HotlikeGiorno]

I so want to write this story since it hits several of my kinks. Problem is I can't write for shit so I thought I might as well write my story idea here so maybe someone likes the idea and writes it. If anyone knows any good catgpt alternative, I can give this idea please tell me.

Our Protagonist is a 18-year-old Boy named Alistair or Ali for short. He comes from a rich family and attends an elite private school. Due to health issues, he is sadly very fat and has an ugly face. He gets bullied severely for this and he has resigned himself to dying a virgin.

He especially gets bullied from pictures of his famous and beautiful relatives. His father is out of the picture, dead or deadbeat it's not important.

He has a mother Persephone (40) who is a famous actress on a similar level of Angelina Jolie or Margot Robbie. Persephone is notorious for dating many powerful men from the likes of politicians, Athletes and CEOs. Ali's bullies use this to mock and belittle him and say its only time for his mother to fuck one of them. She is extremely loving to Ali but is very absent in his life due to her career.

He has an older Sister Jessica (23) is a supermodel in the vein of Adriana Lima or Candice Swanepoel. Bullies purposefully lewd over her in front of Ali to humiliate him. She has a typically stock big sister personality, a bit bitchy and get out of my room type to Ali. They used to be close but for the past few years she's completely shunned him.

Ali meanwhile is in love with the hot superhero Atomica (place holder name its dumb) but knows that he will never be able to be with her due to her being in a different league from him. Atomica is his older Sister Jessica and her being a superhero is why she shut him out of her life to protect him.

Now Ali gets superpowers due to some random accident (you decide) and he now has the powers similar to that of Crazy Diamond from JoJo (this doesn't have to be the power its just a good starting point due to his protective and offensive powers). These powers don't give him a makeover he still remains obese and ugly but with his health problems gone he can now start to lose weight and gain confidence. He will never have 6 packs in the story but he goes from like morbidly obese to being like Jack Black style of fat. After gaining powers he gets a bit confident causing one of his bullies Dominic decide to try and fuck Ali's favorite teacher Marie due to her cheering Ali up every time he gets bullied. His seduction of her is going well and he tries to use it tease Ali but he doesn't care due to his newfound powers so he gets angry and tries to speed up his seduction but he gets rebuffed by Marie who wants to take things slow with a student. Dominic is furious and tries to rape her but Ali saves her and eventually Ali and Marie make love and start a sexual affair.

He dons a mask and a superhero suit using connections he has in the fashion industry due to his sister's modelling career. During his superhero activity he begins to get laid from grateful citizens but he realizes casual sex isn't for him and he wants romance. Eventually he starts meeting Atomica and working a case with her against a mysterious supervillain. Here Ali starts his romance with his idol and eventually has sex with her unknowingly commits incest with his older sister.

At home Ali starts gaining confidence and starts speaking more to his mother and this eventually leads to sexual attraction between them.

At school, Ali's main bully Rick is livid after he comes back from holiday and sees Ali happy and confident. Rick is handsome and rich and extremely successful with the ladies. He has fucked the entire cheerleading team and a few of the school teachers as well. Rick is also a superhero as well but he's more a superhero from the boys who use the hero life to fuck girls and gain admiration. He knows Ali's crush on Atomica and plans to fuck her and take pictures and give to Ali. This plan fails as Atomica thinks he's handsome but an asshole and he just fucks up Ali and Atomica supervillain case so much that Atomica beats him up in front of the press. Rick finds out that Atomica is Jessica and her superhero partner is Ali and that Ali is committing incest which he reveals to Ali who is shocked. Now Rick blackmails Ali on information about Persephone and thinks with her reputation if Ali gives me information about the movie star, I could fuck her and release a sex tape with her and drive Ali to tears that way.

Ali is blackmailed and forced to help Rick with seducing his mother. Rick manages to have a few make out sessions with Persephone and makes plan to fuck her at homecoming where she is chaperoning. Before going to fuck her, he taunts Ali one last time. This infuriates Ali who decides he will never let this happen so he follows him a few minutes later.

Here we discover that Persephone is the supervillain that Jessica has been after all this time and she has been pretending to being seduced by Rick all this time. She knows he bullies Ali and that Rick is a superhero and so she wanted to get his guard down. She has now completely neutered him and made him into a slave with a ken doll body. I mean like Rick has no genitals at all. She tells Ali that she has been doing the same thing with all her rich and powerful men she has dated over the years and has mind controlled them. Turns out after her husband dead or left she started hating on rich and famous men and planned to rule the world through them. She views Ali her son as an exception and she wants him to join her as her partner. She tells him that he will have to give her a decision in 4 months and she and Ali engage in a sexual relationship before then.

Now Ali is torn between his mother and his sister as he fucks his sister as a superhero and his mother at home and sometimes Marie at school. He eventually confesses to his sister that he knows she is Atomica and he has been committing incest with her without her knowing. She is disgusted and slaps Ali and leaves him. Ali after a month of fucking Marie and seemingly agreeing with his mother and fucking her, that he is truly in love with Jessica and goes to her to apologizes and she accepts and they make love and she has him promise too only be with her. He accepts and is his supermodel big sister's boyfriend.
Ali rejects his mother's offer and teams up with Atomica to stop her evil plan of world domination as loads of the guys she had mind controlled where not bad people and some where nice guys and her misandrist ways are wrong.

They win and beat their mother who now goes to supervillain jail to rehabilites herself. Due to her actions Atomica finally joins the big superhero group (like the avengers) which she has always wanted to do.

Now fast forward a year Ali is now 19 and pass the age of consent in their state. He is basically living a married life with Jessica where she loves calling him little bro, baby bro or brother husband and he responds in kind. He has now more of a dad bod. No six packs, and his belly protrudes a bit but he looks much better now. He is now confident and happy with his life with his sister-lover where they occasionally have a threesome with Marie in order to get Marie to do Ali's homework or falsify his grades so he doesn't need to study a home. The story ends on Ali's 19 birthday where Jessica as Atomica comes to Ali's school and makes out with him in front of the entire school since he's legal now and in order to taunt his bullies who see the sexiest superhero in the arms of his former victim.


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[SmokingFap]

I so want to write this story since it hits several of my kinks. Problem is I can't write for shit so I thought I might as well write my story idea here so maybe someone likes the idea and writes it. If anyone knows any good catgpt alternative, I can give this idea please tell me.

Our Protagonist is a 18-year-old Boy named Alistair or Ali for short. He comes from a rich family and attends an elite private school. Due to health issues, he is sadly very fat and has an ugly face. He gets bullied severely for this and he has resigned himself to dying a virgin.

He especially gets bullied from pictures of his famous and beautiful relatives. His father is out of the picture, dead or deadbeat it's not important.

He has a mother Persephone (40) who is a famous actress on a similar level of Angelina Jolie or Margot Robbie. Persephone is notorious for dating many powerful men from the likes of politicians, Athletes and CEOs. Ali's bullies use this to mock and belittle him and say its only time for his mother to fuck one of them. She is extremely loving to Ali but is very absent in his life due to her career.

He has an older Sister Jessica (23) is a supermodel in the vein of Adriana Lima or Candice Swanepoel. Bullies purposefully lewd over her in front of Ali to humiliate him. She has a typically stock big sister personality, a bit bitchy and get out of my room type to Ali. They used to be close but for the past few years she's completely shunned him.

Ali meanwhile is in love with the hot superhero Atomica (place holder name its dumb) but knows that he will never be able to be with her due to her being in a different league from him. Atomica is his older Sister Jessica and her being a superhero is why she shut him out of her life to protect him.

Now Ali gets superpowers due to some random accident (you decide) and he now has the powers similar to that of Crazy Diamond from JoJo (this doesn't have to be the power its just a good starting point due to his protective and offensive powers). These powers don't give him a makeover he still remains obese and ugly but with his health problems gone he can now start to lose weight and gain confidence. He will never have 6 packs in the story but he goes from like morbidly obese to being like Jack Black style of fat. After gaining powers he gets a bit confident causing one of his bullies Dominic decide to try and fuck Ali's favorite teacher Marie due to her cheering Ali up every time he gets bullied. His seduction of her is going well and he tries to use it tease Ali but he doesn't care due to his newfound powers so he gets angry and tries to speed up his seduction but he gets rebuffed by Marie who wants to take things slow with a student. Dominic is furious and tries to rape her but Ali saves her and eventually Ali and Marie make love and start a sexual affair.

He dons a mask and a superhero suit using connections he has in the fashion industry due to his sister's modelling career. During his superhero activity he begins to get laid from grateful citizens but he realizes casual sex isn't for him and he wants romance. Eventually he starts meeting Atomica and working a case with her against a mysterious supervillain. Here Ali starts his romance with his idol and eventually has sex with her unknowingly commits incest with his older sister.

At home Ali starts gaining confidence and starts speaking more to his mother and this eventually leads to sexual attraction between them.

At school, Ali's main bully Rick is livid after he comes back from holiday and sees Ali happy and confident. Rick is handsome and rich and extremely successful with the ladies. He has fucked the entire cheerleading team and a few of the school teachers as well. Rick is also a superhero as well but he's more a superhero from the boys who use the hero life to fuck girls and gain admiration. He knows Ali's crush on Atomica and plans to fuck her and take pictures and give to Ali. This plan fails as Atomica thinks he's handsome but an asshole and he just fucks up Ali and Atomica supervillain case so much that Atomica beats him up in front of the press. Rick finds out that Atomica is Jessica and her superhero partner is Ali and that Ali is committing incest which he reveals to Ali who is shocked. Now Rick blackmails Ali on information about Persephone and thinks with her reputation if Ali gives me information about the movie star, I could fuck her and release a sex tape with her and drive Ali to tears that way.

Ali is blackmailed and forced to help Rick with seducing his mother. Rick manages to have a few make out sessions with Persephone and makes plan to fuck her at homecoming where she is chaperoning. Before going to fuck her, he taunts Ali one last time. This infuriates Ali who decides he will never let this happen so he follows him a few minutes later.

Here we discover that Persephone is the supervillain that Jessica has been after all this time and she has been pretending to being seduced by Rick all this time. She knows he bullies Ali and that Rick is a superhero and so she wanted to get his guard down. She has now completely neutered him and made him into a slave with a ken doll body. I mean like Rick has no genitals at all. She tells Ali that she has been doing the same thing with all her rich and powerful men she has dated over the years and has mind controlled them. Turns out after her husband dead or left she started hating on rich and famous men and planned to rule the world through them. She views Ali her son as an exception and she wants him to join her as her partner. She tells him that he will have to give her a decision in 4 months and she and Ali engage in a sexual relationship before then.

Now Ali is torn between his mother and his sister as he fucks his sister as a superhero and his mother at home and sometimes Marie at school. He eventually confesses to his sister that he knows she is Atomica and he has been committing incest with her without her knowing. She is disgusted and slaps Ali and leaves him. Ali after a month of fucking Marie and seemingly agreeing with his mother and fucking her, that he is truly in love with Jessica and goes to her to apologizes and she accepts and they make love and she has him promise too only be with her. He accepts and is his supermodel big sister's boyfriend.
Ali rejects his mother's offer and teams up with Atomica to stop her evil plan of world domination as loads of the guys she had mind controlled where not bad people and some where nice guys and her misandrist ways are wrong.

They win and beat their mother who now goes to supervillain jail to rehabilites herself. Due to her actions Atomica finally joins the big superhero group (like the avengers) which she has always wanted to do.

Now fast forward a year Ali is now 19 and pass the age of consent in their state. He is basically living a married life with Jessica where she loves calling him little bro, baby bro or brother husband and he responds in kind. He has now more of a dad bod. No six packs, and his belly protrudes a bit but he looks much better now. He is now confident and happy with his life with his sister-lover where they occasionally have a threesome with Marie in order to get Marie to do Ali's homework or falsify his grades so he doesn't need to study a home. The story ends on Ali's 19 birthday where Jessica as Atomica comes to Ali's school and makes out with him in front of the entire school since he's legal now and in order to taunt his bullies who see the sexiest superhero in the arms of his former victim.


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Seems to me that you just wrote the story...

 

[HotlikeGiorno]

Seems to me that you just wrote the story...

I wish. Prose is just not my strong suit

 

[SmokingFap]

I wish. Prose is just not my strong suit

So try poetry?

 

[HotlikeGiorno]

So try poetry?

Despite it being my first language my English skills are non existent. I even picked my engineering degree in the hopes of avoiding essays. Spoilt alert it didn't.

 

[SmokingFap]

Despite it being my first language my English skills are non existent. I even picked my engineering degree in the hopes of avoiding essays. Spoilt alert it didn't.

It actually reads like a fairly decent screenplay. Just add some appropriate dialogue, a couple scenery descriptors, some sound effects (Pow! Wham! Slurp!) and you've got a superhero porno movie.

 

[HotlikeGiorno]

It actually reads like a fairly decent screenplay. Just add some appropriate dialogue, a couple scenery descriptors, some sound effects (Pow! Wham! Slurp!) and you've got a superhero porno movie.

I wish I had the skill of writing to be honest. Reading is one of my passion an i have so many ideas for stories including non pornographic ones but alas creativity is lost on me and I have to get a job like a normal person. I'm just hoping someone far more talented than me takes a interest and writes it.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I wish I had the skill of writing to be honest.

I really get tired of seeing this here. Because it's a cop out. As you say, writing is a skill, which means it's something that can be learned with practice. Talent, does factor into it, but it's what separates the Hemingway's from the rest of us. As an engineer you know this.

Engineering follows the rules of physics. Writing isn't much different, in that it follows the rules of grammar. Grammar can be learned on the fly, just by choosing your tools well. MSWord has a decent spelling and grammar checker. Add something like Grammarly to it and you're off and running.

You don't have to write a story, to get better at writing. Just write a scene. Take your favorite "a _____ walks into bar" joke and write it as a scene. You can do it in fewer words than you already gave us. It has dialogue, a location, an atmosphere, and at least two characters.

Sit down and write it. And then do it again, and again. It worked for the rest of us.

 

[daddyslittlebitch]

Feels like you've put enough detail into this that only you can write it now. You could probably find lots of people who might write a story with the loose outline "high school loser has a crush on hot girl superhero - gets superpowers and now he can fuck her - oops, turns out it's his sister". But they would do it with their own kinks inserted in addition to the accidental incest. If you don't want people to put their own spin on it then they probably wouldn't run with the idea. But as you've plotted the whole story out yourself, you may as well write it.

And here's the good news: nobody expects their free porn to be written to a publishable literary standard! Is there some really good writing on this site? Sure, but most of it (mine included) is pretty amateurish and still gets read because people want to read about dirty sex even if clumsily written

 

[HotlikeGiorno]

Does anyone know a good Chatgpt alternative. Thinking of writing a skeleton and having a ai write it in prose.

 

[daddyslittlebitch]

Does anyone know a good Chatgpt alternative. Thinking of writing a skeleton and having a ai write it in prose.

Lit won't allow AI. They will, however, allow an inexperienced writer to put out something that's far from perfect prose. Just fill in the gaps in your outline yourself

 

[HotlikeGiorno]

I'll try but I make no promises.

 

[Series 6]

I so want to write this story since it hits several of my kinks. Problem is I can't write for shit so I thought I might as well write my story idea here so maybe someone likes the idea and writes it. If anyone knows any good catgpt alternative, I can give this idea please tell me.

Our Protagonist is a 18-year-old Boy named Alistair or Ali for short. He comes from a rich family and attends an elite private school. Due to health issues, he is sadly very fat and has an ugly face. He gets bullied severely for this and he has resigned himself to dying a virgin.

He especially gets bullied from pictures of his famous and beautiful relatives. His father is out of the picture, dead or deadbeat it's not important.

He has a mother Persephone (40) who is a famous actress on a similar level of Angelina Jolie or Margot Robbie. Persephone is notorious for dating many powerful men from the likes of politicians, Athletes and CEOs. Ali's bullies use this to mock and belittle him and say its only time for his mother to fuck one of them. She is extremely loving to Ali but is very absent in his life due to her career.

He has an older Sister Jessica (23) is a supermodel in the vein of Adriana Lima or Candice Swanepoel. Bullies purposefully lewd over her in front of Ali to humiliate him. She has a typically stock big sister personality, a bit bitchy and get out of my room type to Ali. They used to be close but for the past few years she's completely shunned him.

Ali meanwhile is in love with the hot superhero Atomica (place holder name its dumb) but knows that he will never be able to be with her due to her being in a different league from him. Atomica is his older Sister Jessica and her being a superhero is why she shut him out of her life to protect him.

Now Ali gets superpowers due to some random accident (you decide) and he now has the powers similar to that of Crazy Diamond from JoJo (this doesn't have to be the power its just a good starting point due to his protective and offensive powers). These powers don't give him a makeover he still remains obese and ugly but with his health problems gone he can now start to lose weight and gain confidence. He will never have 6 packs in the story but he goes from like morbidly obese to being like Jack Black style of fat. After gaining powers he gets a bit confident causing one of his bullies Dominic decide to try and fuck Ali's favorite teacher Marie due to her cheering Ali up every time he gets bullied. His seduction of her is going well and he tries to use it tease Ali but he doesn't care due to his newfound powers so he gets angry and tries to speed up his seduction but he gets rebuffed by Marie who wants to take things slow with a student. Dominic is furious and tries to rape her but Ali saves her and eventually Ali and Marie make love and start a sexual affair.

He dons a mask and a superhero suit using connections he has in the fashion industry due to his sister's modelling career. During his superhero activity he begins to get laid from grateful citizens but he realizes casual sex isn't for him and he wants romance. Eventually he starts meeting Atomica and working a case with her against a mysterious supervillain. Here Ali starts his romance with his idol and eventually has sex with her unknowingly commits incest with his older sister.

At home Ali starts gaining confidence and starts speaking more to his mother and this eventually leads to sexual attraction between them.

At school, Ali's main bully Rick is livid after he comes back from holiday and sees Ali happy and confident. Rick is handsome and rich and extremely successful with the ladies. He has fucked the entire cheerleading team and a few of the school teachers as well. Rick is also a superhero as well but he's more a superhero from the boys who use the hero life to fuck girls and gain admiration. He knows Ali's crush on Atomica and plans to fuck her and take pictures and give to Ali. This plan fails as Atomica thinks he's handsome but an asshole and he just fucks up Ali and Atomica supervillain case so much that Atomica beats him up in front of the press. Rick finds out that Atomica is Jessica and her superhero partner is Ali and that Ali is committing incest which he reveals to Ali who is shocked. Now Rick blackmails Ali on information about Persephone and thinks with her reputation if Ali gives me information about the movie star, I could fuck her and release a sex tape with her and drive Ali to tears that way.

Ali is blackmailed and forced to help Rick with seducing his mother. Rick manages to have a few make out sessions with Persephone and makes plan to fuck her at homecoming where she is chaperoning. Before going to fuck her, he taunts Ali one last time. This infuriates Ali who decides he will never let this happen so he follows him a few minutes later.

Here we discover that Persephone is the supervillain that Jessica has been after all this time and she has been pretending to being seduced by Rick all this time. She knows he bullies Ali and that Rick is a superhero and so she wanted to get his guard down. She has now completely neutered him and made him into a slave with a ken doll body. I mean like Rick has no genitals at all. She tells Ali that she has been doing the same thing with all her rich and powerful men she has dated over the years and has mind controlled them. Turns out after her husband dead or left she started hating on rich and famous men and planned to rule the world through them. She views Ali her son as an exception and she wants him to join her as her partner. She tells him that he will have to give her a decision in 4 months and she and Ali engage in a sexual relationship before then.

Now Ali is torn between his mother and his sister as he fucks his sister as a superhero and his mother at home and sometimes Marie at school. He eventually confesses to his sister that he knows she is Atomica and he has been committing incest with her without her knowing. She is disgusted and slaps Ali and leaves him. Ali after a month of fucking Marie and seemingly agreeing with his mother and fucking her, that he is truly in love with Jessica and goes to her to apologizes and she accepts and they make love and she has him promise too only be with her. He accepts and is his supermodel big sister's boyfriend.
Ali rejects his mother's offer and teams up with Atomica to stop her evil plan of world domination as loads of the guys she had mind controlled where not bad people and some where nice guys and her misandrist ways are wrong.

They win and beat their mother who now goes to supervillain jail to rehabilites herself. Due to her actions Atomica finally joins the big superhero group (like the avengers) which she has always wanted to do.

Now fast forward a year Ali is now 19 and pass the age of consent in their state. He is basically living a married life with Jessica where she loves calling him little bro, baby bro or brother husband and he responds in kind. He has now more of a dad bod. No six packs, and his belly protrudes a bit but he looks much better now. He is now confident and happy with his life with his sister-lover where they occasionally have a threesome with Marie in order to get Marie to do Ali's homework or falsify his grades so he doesn't need to study a home. The story ends on Ali's 19 birthday where Jessica as Atomica comes to Ali's school and makes out with him in front of the entire school since he's legal now and in order to taunt his bullies who see the sexiest superhero in the arms of his former victim.


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My suggestion is to give it a try writing it yourself. You seem to have a lot of ideas. Read a few stories to get some ideas on how to tell the story you have in your head. Take your time with it and get some help from editors. I think you will surprise yourself with what you can come up with. Don’t sell yourself short.

 

[Series 6]

I really get tired of seeing this here. Because it's a cop out. As you say, writing is a skill, which means it's something that can be learned with practice. Talent, does factor into it, but it's what separates the Hemingway's from the rest of us. As an engineer you know this.

Engineering follows the rules of physics. Writing isn't much different, in that it follows the rules of grammar. Grammar can be learned on the fly, just by choosing your tools well. MSWord has a decent spelling and grammar checker. Add something like Grammarly to it and you're off and running.

You don't have to write a story, to get better at writing. Just write a scene. Take your favorite "a _____ walks into bar" joke and write it as a scene. You can do it in fewer words than you already gave us. It has dialogue, a location, an atmosphere, and at least two characters.

Sit down and write it. And then do it again, and again. It worked for the rest of us.

Agree. Start with something short. Consider writing something for the 750 word challenge.

 

[GlennJenko]

I can't write the story for you, OP, given what others have said about you already having quite a clear vision of what you want, but I'd be more than happy to help review and edit it. I know my stories aren't the greatest literary works ever, but I have been through the writing and publishing process myself and had some of the same anxieties as you.