Valentine's Day 2011 Contest Support Thread

Hmm.. my story has hit a lull... After that initial BAM it's a new story, lol, here we are on the downslide. :p

I'm okay with that. I've gotten wonderful comments and I'm glad people are enjoying it. :)

As a side note, I way so really dont wanna go to work today.
I'm pouting. :(
I wanna stay home and write. Waa!
We've got more snow coming today, so maybe I can get some done tonight..?
Let us hope! :)
Then I plan to spend a serious hunk of time reading the entries. Whoop whoop! :nana:
 
I'm still getting through the entries (or submissions. Either way, they sound dirty :p).

I may have also accidentally started a Loving Wives story.
 
SweetMerry: Goodluck with that reconnection!

EmeraldKitten: Hit a lull over here too. Maybe it'll pick up after the deadline has passed!

It's not a Valentine's Entry...but my newest story posted! If anyone finds themselves bored and would like to read a shifter story in the Sci-Fi/Fantasy Category. I'd love some feedback on it (and votes wouldn't hurt either). Do you think I succeeded in freshening up the subject matter? Thanks! :cattail:

~Shifting Illuminations~

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words of wisdom from the dumb texan? posted on the scouries thread...

http://forum.literotica.com/image.php?u=468397&dateline=1261248818​

[SIZE=+4]Welcome to ScouriesWritnigWorld[/SIZE]

Where Scouries kindness is the shining light.

And the beautiful, helpful Grand_High_Poobah aka Gabby aka Gabrielle L. is one of ScouriesWorld finest employees.


the ASSOCIATION of INDEPENDENT READERS (A.I.R.) is independent and not associated with Lit, it’s sponsored by LITEROTICA’S #1 Author (scouries), it offers authors an opportunity to participate in a fair contest, thank you Jim Scouries.

Look at all the wonderful (and FAVORITE) authors who’ve won one of the A.I.R. Contests. A who’s who of the GREATS. Writers like sarahhh, manyfeathers, Slickman, alwayswanntedto, D.G.Hear, DanielQSteele, JustPlainBob, BarondeSade, MugsbyB, ohio, TryAnyythhing, serena, etc., etc.

Scouries is wonderful!!!!


[size=+2]Jerome[/size]
teenager … champion of “favorite” writers
dixie’s nemesis
retard regurgitator
 
:rolleyes:

Last day to enter the (real) contest. If you're still trying to finish up, you have until 11:59, so best get cracking.
 
Poor scouries, his alts are giving him a melt down and no one cares, cause they have a real contest to enter and not a fake one.

Sorry scouries but this tactic won't work either. The truth about your crap will still get out to everyone. You making a mess on other threads won't stop anything. Actually, It just shows people the type character you really are.

Here is the actual post i made:

[SIZE=+4]Welcome to ScouriesFantasyWorld[/SIZE]

Where Scouries ego is the one and only thing that counts.


Scouries Family – Mandy's Story Mother gives into desires; seduces son, then dad.
4.70 999 149388 Incest/Taboo (English) 08/27/06

I saw the above when I was checking the boss's numbers this morning. How could I not do it?

The 1000th vote for this wonderful story was made by yours truly three minutes ago.

And the cool thing is that I've met the real life Scouries family members who are the characters in the story.​
[size=+2]Gabrielle L.[/size]
President, A.I.R.
Secretery of the MOST COMMENTED on
and the MOST VOTED on story clubs
Miami Beach, Florida

Since you are an alt of scouries by his own admission, you are saying you are voting on your own stories. How interesting.

Scouries caught in his own lies and bullshit.
 
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This was just too fun to pass up :)

So has anyone's SO not accepted/enjoyed the fact that you write erotica?
Yes, I've had a GF who didn't like it. I don't, currently. My SO is rather accepting and supportive, and thinks I should write professionally.

She enjoys most of the stories I write... Especially anything with N/C in it.

Or is jealous that you aren't always writing about them?

I'm not? Oh right. Not always <.<' That'd get rather boring, wouldn't it? She doesn't mind. I don't do stories about people she knows or celebrities or w/e.


And that you are thinking about other "people"?

Other people's problems and genitals, mostly...


Any of them in the dark and not know that little secret?

Everyone (Literally everyone I know) knows I write, or find out eventually. When asked I'll submit to them I write "Smut" or if I want to be a little more subtle "Romance." If they press further I'll tell them any detail they'd like.

My sister, for example, knows exactly what I write, and even beta-reads my stories for me. Currently working on an incest story about a brother and sister, though. Saying its not awkward knowing she reads it would be a lie. However, she's rather fallen in love with the sister's character, and keeps pushing me to give her new chapters...


Do you keep this separate from your waking life? You don't show anyone that you personally know, what you write?
Nup. I simply do not give a fuck what people might think <.<' I've had too many emails from people who love reading it to let prude-ness stifle my creativity.

Are any of you more adventurous in your writing than you are in "real life"?
...A bit. Most of the time the story is tamer, at least for the most part. I get into some... interesting experiences.

Do you write things that you don't agree with believe in/outside your morals, and if so WHY? HOW?
Mm... Kinda. I could never sleep with my sister - for example. That plays out better in fantasy, where you can sculpt a better world for such things.

Not to mention she can be annoying as fuck sometimes.

Yup, full of questions today (as little or as many as you want). Thanks for humoring me!

Hee. Fun ^_^'



~DB
 
Okaydoke, my story went up on the 4th. Not quite skin of the teeth, but still pretty close.

I really must stop procrastinating over things.

Someday.

Anyway, it's the story of what transpires when a new aphrodisiac drug being tested at a university pharmacology lab gets out amongst the staff on Valentine's Day: "Compound 14/02"
 
Okaydoke, my story went up on the 4th. Not quite skin of the teeth, but still pretty close.

I really must stop procrastinating over things.

Someday.

Anyway, it's the story of what transpires when a new aphrodisiac drug being tested at a university pharmacology lab gets out amongst the staff on Valentine's Day: "Compound 14/02"

Sounds like a fun romp. :)

Oh, the pic in your signature? Classic. ;)
 
I must like to push thresholds. Started writing an entry for the contest around the first of January, trashed the whole thing around the 22. Got a whiff of creativity this week and wrote my new tale. Still pending, but I think I might make it in time.
 
Anyway, it's the story of what transpires when a new aphrodisiac drug being tested at a university pharmacology lab gets out amongst the staff on Valentine's Day: "Compound 14/02"

Your story is without a doubt, amazing. I truly hope it wins. It's the most original story I've read in the submissions so far... and to be fair I haven't read them all so don't take that as a slight, any people who've entered... I've just read some and most of them didn't stand out to me. But this one was five stars all the way.

I got my story up! It's my first actually serious bit of erotica on the site, woo. Yay for me.
 
Thanks for the suggestions guys. I didn't remember that you could edit a story after it was published. In any case another editor came through so I was able to submit it now.
Now off to read the submissions :)

Erin

If you edit it, don't tell Scouries. He'll have a cow. :rolleyes:
 
Sweet, I did make it under the radar. I'm still stuck on whether I chose the right category. It's under fantasy, but mind control and erotic horror could have worked as well. I came up with this one while sitting in traffic during a rainy rush hour and put it together in the last three days. Hope it gets some eyes on it.

http://www.literotica.com/s/whatever-you-wish
 
I'm just here to write stories. I'm not here to win a contest or so much to make friends. I just love to write

I have read a lot of stories, some so good and others not so good. Rarely do I leave a comment because who I am and the perception that others have of me. Yet, if I take the time to read a story, I leave a 5 vote, which is what I did when I had my story highlight/review thread under Andtheend. I was bashed for having that thread, until I had to stop highlighting stories of new writers.

Yet, in the 4 years I've written here, I have never attacked another writers' work, unless attacked first. Oh, yeah, my detractors will spin that I'm the one. I'm not. I'm too busy writing my stories to follow all that goes on here.

Now PrincessErin returns to the board and leaves comments on my stories that they are bad and that they are all the same. Of course my stories aren't bad and none of them read the same. More importantly what does that say about this woman?

If she is openly bashing my stories, leaving her name, who else is she bashing? Is she secretly bashing your story, too?

Further for her to write that my stories are bad and all the sames says much about her stories. If she cannot tell a good story from a bad story and a unique story from the same story, then that explains why so many of her stories are so short and are lacking in plot, dialogue, sex, a beginning, a middle, and an ending.

I don't bother anyone. I rarely make a post. If you all don't like me, just respect me. I'm a writer just like you. I'm here to practice and become a better writer.

How dare you PrincessErin? Get some help. Stop shitting on my stories.
 
I can understand why you'd be upset if someone is really marking down all your stories, but it's a risk we all take posting on here. At least it's not a vitriolic attack against you personally, something that the trolls on here do sometimes do.

There's nothing virtuous about only ever marking 5 stars. If one does that, how is one to differentiate between the OK, the good and the truly excellent?

P.S. I'm not taking sides, just throwing in my own opinion, for what it's worth.
 
This is her comment to my story, A Gentleman's Valentine's for a Lady

Awful
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
A very long story with not a lot going on.

This is her comment to my story, Angel of Mercy, My Young Valentine

Bad
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Now your stories are just plain bad.

This is her comment to my story, Bound & Blindfolded for Valentine's Day

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Sounded so much like your other stories.

This is her comment to my story, Cross Dressing for Valentine's Day

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Once again I believe I have read a story similar to this by BOSTONFICTIONWRITER. Is there some plagiarism happening?

This is her comment to my story, Desperately Seeking Susan

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
This story sounds very similar to a story BOSTONFICTIONWRITER wrote in 2008. Good luck in the contest.

This is her comment to my story, Dr. Valentine a Specialist in Love

Not unique
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Once again a boring. repetitive story. Nice try posting a contest entry in each category.

This is her comment for my story, Girlfriends, Valentine's and Lovers

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
I really didn't like this story because it sounds so much like your other stories

This is her comment for my story, Heavenly Angel, My Ghostly Valentine

Useless Dialogue
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
The purpose of dialogue is to give information into the characters. This story has useless dialogue.

This is her comment to my story, How To Have A Happy Valentine's Cheap

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Even the story title is awkward

This is her comment to my story, Love My Ass, I Have Valentine's Day

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
From a literary view point, essays should not have any questions. The number of questions posed in this story is ridiculous

This is her comment to my story, Mommy's Favorite Valentine Is Me

Horrible
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Please stop writing.

This is her comment to my story, Ropes and Roses, I Love Your Friend

Typical
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Although much better written then your other stories, this was a typical romance story, pretty boring.

This is her comment to my story, Same Time, Same Place, Next Week

Horrible
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
I can't even say anything I'm stunned at the lack of quality.

This is her comment to my story, Sarah Palin, Sex & Valentine's Day

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
I know many people think Sarah Palin is sexy so thank you for writing a story for those people.

This is her comment to my story, Sister Lauren, Father Riley, and Me

Typical
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Once again another story with the same writing and pretty much same story line. Good luck in the contest.

This is her comment to my story, Starship Obama on Valentine's Day

Awful
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another awful story.

This is her comment to my story, Swingers' Erotic Valentine's Dance

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Really not a good story..

This is her comment to my story, The XB-900, My Happy Valentine Toy

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another weird, badly written story.

This is her comment to my story, Valentine's Fortune Teller is a Witch

02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another repetitive story.

This is her comment to my story, Valentine Dilemma Buying Online

Horrible
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Such a badly written story

This is her comment to my story, Yellow Roses on Valentine's Day

Bad
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another story that sounds similar to all your others

PrincessErin bashed 20 of my 30 stories with the above comments. She actually read 20 of my 30 stories, when I wrote 150,000 words for the Valentine's Day contest. She read 2 1/2 novels in one day and had nothing good to say about any of them.

Only an idiot would continue reading a writer that they hate and believe cannot write.

I'm sending a PM to Laurel, PrincessErin. It's people like you who ruin this site for the rest of us who are here to read and write stories.

Maybe we should all compare your one page contest story, PrincessErin, to any of my stories.

If you don't like me, leave me alone.
 
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This is her comment to my story, A Gentleman's Valentine's for a Lady

Awful
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
A very long story with not a lot going on.

This is her comment to my story, Angel of Mercy, My Young Valentine

Bad
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Now your stories are just plain bad.

This is her comment to my story, Bound & Blindfolded for Valentine's Day

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Sounded so much like your other stories.

This is her comment to my story, Cross Dressing for Valentine's Day

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Once again I believe I have read a story similar to this by BOSTONFICTIONWRITER. Is there some plagiarism happening?

This is her comment to my story, Desperately Seeking Susan

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
This story sounds very similar to a story BOSTONFICTIONWRITER wrote in 2008. Good luck in the contest.

This is her comment to my story, Dr. Valentine a Specialist in Love

Not unique
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Once again a boring. repetitive story. Nice try posting a contest entry in each category.

This is her comment for my story, Girlfriends, Valentine's and Lovers

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
I really didn't like this story because it sounds so much like your other stories

This is her comment for my story, Heavenly Angel, My Ghostly Valentine

Useless Dialogue
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
The purpose of dialogue is to give information into the characters. This story has useless dialogue.

This is her comment to my story, How To Have A Happy Valentine's Cheap

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Even the story title is awkward

This is her comment to my story, Love My Ass, I Have Valentine's Day

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
From a literary view point, essays should not have any questions. The number of questions posed in this story is ridiculous

This is her comment to my story, Mommy's Favorite Valentine Is Me

Horrible
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Please stop writing.

This is her comment to my story, Ropes and Roses, I Love Your Friend

Typical
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Although much better written then your other stories, this was a typical romance story, pretty boring.

This is her comment to my story, Same Time, Same Place, Next Week

Horrible
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
I can't even say anything I'm stunned at the lack of quality.

This is her comment to my story, Sarah Palin, Sex & Valentine's Day

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
I know many people think Sarah Palin is sexy so thank you for writing a story for those people.

This is her comment to my story, Sister Lauren, Father Riley, and Me

Typical
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Once again another story with the same writing and pretty much same story line. Good luck in the contest.

This is her comment to my story, Starship Obama on Valentine's Day

Awful
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another awful story.

This is her comment to my story, Swingers' Erotic Valentine's Dance

Boring
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Really not a good story..

This is her comment to my story, The XB-900, My Happy Valentine Toy

Weird
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another weird, badly written story.

This is her comment to my story, Valentine's Fortune Teller is a Witch

02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another repetitive story.

This is her comment to my story, Valentine Dilemma Buying Online

Horrible
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Such a badly written story

This is her comment to my story, Yellow Roses on Valentine's Day

Bad
02/05/11 By: PrincessErin
Another story that sounds similar to all your others

PrincessErin bashed 20 of my 30 stories with the above comments. She actually read 20 of my 30 stories, when I wrote 150,000 words for the Valentine's Day contest. She read 2 1/2 novels in one day and had nothing good to say about any of them.

Only an idiot would continue reading a writer that they hate and believe cannot write.

I'm sending a PM to Laurel, PrincessErin. It's people like you who ruin this site for the rest of us who are here to read and write stories.

Maybe we should all compare your one page contest story, PrincessErin, to any of my stories.

If you don't like me, leave me alone.

No one has a comment about my post. Is this appropriate behavior for a fellow writer to write these comments on so many stories?

Obviously, she didn't even read any of the stories, just shit on them.

How would you feel if a fellow writer did this to your stories? If a fellow writer treated your work with such disrespect, you'd all would have plenty to say then.

And yet, she posted a contest story today. I hope every writer who writes a story gives PrincessErin the appropriate feedback her story deserves.
 
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comment made on a story today...

It took untill the last day before one of the SUPERSTARS of LITEROTICA submitted an entry in the 2011 Valentines Day Contest. Until now we had been stuck with rookies, alts, ego maniacs and perverts (with the exception of a few good writers such as BOXMAN, DrHeat, and the smart texan).

We also had 31 entries from that lunatic SUPERASSRALPHIE - can't someone do something about this menace?

But an entry by LITEROTICA'S 'Most Favorited' Author has saved us. And I for one would like to thank SLICKMAN for his entry. FYI this author has written more than 10 stories that have recieved 1000+ votes and he is a charter member of the 1000 VOTE CLUB.

His VALENTINE story is wonderful and I reccommend it to everyone. Many readers believe it's the odds on favoritte to win the A.I.R. VALENTINES CONTEST which is running concurrently with the LITEROTICA one.

http://www.asstr.org/~Kristen/putrid/theif.jpg
a contented slickkman reader

Well done sir!!!


Gabrielle L.
South Beacch
 
The last time I looked ( several days ago ) there were quite a few stories with Hs -- more than usual. I might go through and see if I have the energy to track the roller-coaster final week of the contest. Maybe just the H or near H stories. We'll see.

Good luck to everybody who made it in time.
 
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