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Wow....300th post to the thread! Only 3 days in! Awesome! Thanks everybody!
 
"Morning Wood (Would)"

“Morning Would”

Morning would wake to find us nestled
Coupled together like branches growing as one in the midst of thickets.
It would stare at us in wonder,
Hoping that one day Evening or Night might be as kind.
Morning would stare intently
At our touching and our gazing.
Rays blazing, her jealousy would burn the earth with our heat.
She would tap at our window
As she rouses nature from its slumber.
As She places dew on each blade of grass, Morning would
Imagine that she were you
That was stroking my face tenderly.
Morning would reach
Yet not be able to touch.
There we would sit, just out of reach…
Cuddled together.
Nibbling upon the sweetest fruit that Morning helped to grow
Whose taste she could never know
And while she would hope one day for it to be so,
Morning would despise us…
Yet love us all at once.
Morning would imagine her form as your
And evening as mine.
Morning would seek to live those first moments
As live every moment.
Morning would, but only if she could.
Alas, Morning can’t.
But we can.
 
Congrats on 300, BMF. And great work, everyone. All of you make me feel like a semi-literate talking monkey :eek:
 
Congrats on 300, BMF. And great work, everyone. All of you make me feel like a semi-literate talking monkey :eek:

LOL!!! Dude, its an honor having so much participation. I'm waiting on your next stage appearance!
 
Since nobody's in here....

I'll sneak an explicit rhyme past the sleeping masses:

"Dreaming"

I woke up to a vision of you riding me.
Your soft skin shining as you're sliding on me.
Bouncing, and even gliding on me
My first thoughts to myself were,
"Wow, how can this be?"
I remember reaching up with shaking hands
Cupping your breasts with these shaking hands
Massaging your nipples, squeezing and
Pinching them slight with these shaking hands.
Mind racing fast with all of these plans
For if I ever had you in this circumstance.
Wasn't quite ready for this kind of dance
Had to rearrange, and figure out my stance.
Watching your figure as it moved around
Side to side, then up and down
Face full of exstacy, joy abounds
Lips uttering such lusty sounds.
I remember eyes staring back at me
Couldn't pull away, glaring passionately
As you worked your hips magnificently
I felt my orgasm coming rapidly.
Oh no...
I gotta make this last drastically
Gotta send your body convulsing and spasming
Need to switch up our positions, just follow me
I'll make it worth your while, just pose in front of me.
Since I know I won't win in this present state
I reposition your body, then sit back and gape
On all fours, me lined up behind
Drooling noticeably, trying to still my mind.
Hands running over your firmly toned ass
Forgive me if this sounds too crass
But I smacked it once, then I smacked it twice
Then I slid in and it felt so nice.
Such tenderness, and juicy too
I felt it all around me as I was stroking you
Walls squeezing me, holding me tight
Contracting and pulsing, it just felt right.
Watching your form out in front of me
Rocking back and forth rhythmically
Your movements oh so gracefully
Urging me and pleading me.
And in my dream you sucked on me
I licked and lapped, and tasted thee.
The climax came, and shattered
Until only left of both was just
Me
Laying all alone in my bed
Visions of your body departing my head.
Curves disappearing for yet another day,
Returning at night for another foray.
 
I'll sneak an explicit rhyme past the sleeping masses:

"Dreaming"

I woke up to a vision of you riding me.
Your soft skin shining as you're sliding on me.
Bouncing, and even gliding on me
My first thoughts to myself were,
"Wow, how can this be?"
I remember reaching up with shaking hands
Cupping your breasts with these shaking hands
Massaging your nipples, squeezing and
Pinching them slight with these shaking hands.
Mind racing fast with all of these plans
For if I ever had you in this circumstance.
Wasn't quite ready for this kind of dance
Had to rearrange, and figure out my stance.
Watching your figure as it moved around
Side to side, then up and down
Face full of exstacy, joy abounds
Lips uttering such lusty sounds.
I remember eyes staring back at me
Couldn't pull away, glaring passionately
As you worked your hips magnificently
I felt my orgasm coming rapidly.
Oh no...
I gotta make this last drastically
Gotta send your body convulsing and spasming
Need to switch up our positions, just follow me
I'll make it worth your while, just pose in front of me.
Since I know I won't win in this present state
I reposition your body, then sit back and gape
On all fours, me lined up behind
Drooling noticeably, trying to still my mind.
Hands running over your firmly toned ass
Forgive me if this sounds too crass
But I smacked it once, then I smacked it twice
Then I slid in and it felt so nice.
Such tenderness, and juicy too
I felt it all around me as I was stroking you
Walls squeezing me, holding me tight
Contracting and pulsing, it just felt right.
Watching your form out in front of me
Rocking back and forth rhythmically
Your movements oh so gracefully
Urging me and pleading me.
And in my dream you sucked on me
I licked and lapped, and tasted thee.
The climax came, and shattered
Until only left of both was just
Me
Laying all alone in my bed
Visions of your body departing my head.
Curves disappearing for yet another day,
Returning at night for another foray.

Dammitman.....I think you just gave me a semi....
 
Beautifully written Sensualdreamer, I can feel the sadness of knowing someone had to resort to something like that in the end. I had a friend who had commited suicide and I didn't know it until a year later when his FB wall was filled with messages and I was like whoa...no one told me.

I wish I could get my creative/poetic side of me back...it has been a while.

You'll get the inspiration...look around - life is full of experiences from which to draw from. I'm sorry that you also lost a friend ((hugs))

SD, I can't even relate to how that must have felt, but this poem almost puts me inside your heart. I feel the heaviness. You're quite good. Thank you for posting here.

Thank you for allowing me to post my writings in your thread...it's nice to have a place to do so.
I'll sneak an explicit rhyme past the sleeping masses:

"Dreaming"

I woke up to a vision of you riding me.
Your soft skin shining as you're sliding on me.
Bouncing, and even gliding on me
My first thoughts to myself were,
"Wow, how can this be?"
I remember reaching up with shaking hands
Cupping your breasts with these shaking hands
Massaging your nipples, squeezing and
Pinching them slight with these shaking hands.
Mind racing fast with all of these plans
For if I ever had you in this circumstance.
Wasn't quite ready for this kind of dance
Had to rearrange, and figure out my stance.
Watching your figure as it moved around
Side to side, then up and down
Face full of exstacy, joy abounds
Lips uttering such lusty sounds.
I remember eyes staring back at me
Couldn't pull away, glaring passionately
As you worked your hips magnificently
I felt my orgasm coming rapidly.
Oh no...
I gotta make this last drastically
Gotta send your body convulsing and spasming
Need to switch up our positions, just follow me
I'll make it worth your while, just pose in front of me.
Since I know I won't win in this present state
I reposition your body, then sit back and gape
On all fours, me lined up behind
Drooling noticeably, trying to still my mind.
Hands running over your firmly toned ass
Forgive me if this sounds too crass
But I smacked it once, then I smacked it twice
Then I slid in and it felt so nice.
Such tenderness, and juicy too
I felt it all around me as I was stroking you
Walls squeezing me, holding me tight
Contracting and pulsing, it just felt right.
Watching your form out in front of me
Rocking back and forth rhythmically
Your movements oh so gracefully
Urging me and pleading me.
And in my dream you sucked on me
I licked and lapped, and tasted thee.
The climax came, and shattered
Until only left of both was just
Me
Laying all alone in my bed
Visions of your body departing my head.
Curves disappearing for yet another day,
Returning at night for another foray.



Oh wow BMF...you've got a smooth way w/ words, just read your latest and oh so wow...I'm speechless!!! :eek: I could SO hear this being sung by LL Cool J (check his song out called "Imagine That"...you'll see why I said him instead of another artist...oops forgot the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=B1buzIRNXUo )
 
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You'll get the inspiration...look around - life is full of experiences from which to draw from. I'm sorry that you also lost a friend ((hugs))



Thank you for allowing me to post my writings in your thread...it's nice to have a place to do so.




Oh wow BMF...you've got a smooth way w/ words, just read your latest and oh so wow...I'm speechless!!! :eek: I could SO hear this being sung by LL Cool J (check his song out called "Imagine That"...you'll see why I said him instead of another artist)

thank you ma'am!!
 
This was a poem I wrote after going through a difficult time in my life...

"The Value of Myself"

As the beauty falls below the shadows
and the clouds come before the rain
I see the sun is shining
over the meadows again.

Do you see the rainbow from within
for my blue eyes know less sorrow
Do you see that I am happy
and I look forward to tomorrow

I wake up in the morning
for I have slept through the night
I say hello to other people
I know everything is right.

Time has healed my pain
Love has cured my past
I have learned the value
Loving myself I'll last.
 
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