I apologize if the is getting placed in the wrong spot, but I couldn't quiet find the right place that this post would fit.
I searched through the How-To's and was unable to locate an article for my particular issue... the sex scenes that I've written when I read them back fall a little flat. All that I have are various versions of "Ohs" and "Uh' which is incredibly boring... but I don't know how to fill it. The personal experience is lacking... I have expanded the old cliches of those that can, do. Those that can't, teach (or write).
If anyone is interested, I'd appreciate the help.
Thanks in advanced.
K.
I searched through the How-To's and was unable to locate an article for my particular issue... the sex scenes that I've written when I read them back fall a little flat. All that I have are various versions of "Ohs" and "Uh' which is incredibly boring... but I don't know how to fill it. The personal experience is lacking... I have expanded the old cliches of those that can, do. Those that can't, teach (or write).
If anyone is interested, I'd appreciate the help.
Thanks in advanced.
K.
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