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Do you ever want to reply with, "There are doctors who could help you, man, if you just let them"?
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Every time I post in Loving Wives...Do you ever want to reply with, "There are doctors who could help you, man, if you just let them"?
And, as far as I can tell, she hasn't been around since several of us made complaints about her behaviour. Notwithstanding which, every constructive, reasonable post-St_cnash comment has been appreciated all the more when compared to the bar that she set. That's why I like this thread: not because all the quoted comments tend to be nice, but because they're nice in the context of a shitty world.(snip) ...since the last time she who shall not be named was around.
I mean, you're not wrong.... but was racism really the biggest ethical problem you saw with this plot synopsis?a story about black men drugging white women for sex seemed kinda racist.
Oh no, the whole thing sounded like a dumpster fire, from nonconsensual sex (through drugging) to forced feminization of their (white, of course) husbands to the aforementioned racism of the entire plot as described in the original “looking for story” post. I try not to kink shame, but…I mean, you're not wrong.... but was racism really the biggest ethical problem you saw with this plot synopsis?
What an incredible start and insight to the series.
Another writer/author on here recommended following you, that your writing was brilliant. I am so glad they did and that I have. Your writing is so brilliant and enveloping. Once I start reading one or your stories I can’t stop until the end. Thank you so much.
@gordo12,I got this one this morning on "Homeless." It's my new favourite.
"Anonymous about 4 hours ago
I will not read anymore of your stories. I spend too much time with tears in my eyes. Time for me to register with Literotica so you can be in my first five favorites!"
It just made my day!
Post your comments when a fan makes your day.![]()
So.Much.Fun.
Seriously, you crushed it with this one.


Sadly there's no easy mechanism. You could message them via the forum, but there's no guarantee that they're active on this side of the site. you could send them private feedback via their user profile page, if they have that setting turned on.
Thanks for that. I made a gratitude response in the comments area for at least one story. Just wanted to let them know I read the comments and appreciate the words. Now back to checking punctuation in the next story. Sigh.Sadly there's no easy mechanism. You could message them via the forum, but there's no guarantee that they're active on this side of the site. you could send them private feedback via their user profile page, if they have that setting turned on.
Many people (myself included) will post a comment to their own story thanking the commenter, but they won't get a notification and I don't think very many readers go back and look at the comments a second time![]()
For this story, Penny put together a team of brilliant beta readers, from the legend that is Emily Miller, to inter-racial specialist SinclairGroupLLP, E&V hall of famer Nynah, and recent competition winner Actingup. This is yet another strength of Penny's - she understands that writing is not a zero-sum game. We can be great individually, and even better together. She seeks support, actively collaborates and taps into other's expertise in order to make her stories as absorbing as she possibly can.
Right back at you, kiddo!To every single person I've gotten to interact positively with here, I love you very much![]()
I work on the theory that, although most people won’t check for a response, some of them do, and others will see your appreciation and be motivated to comment accordingly. I also DM named commentators when I have the energy.Sadly there's no easy mechanism. You could message them via the forum, but there's no guarantee that they're active on this side of the site. you could send them private feedback via their user profile page, if they have that setting turned on.
Many people (myself included) will post a comment to their own story thanking the commenter, but they won't get a notification and I don't think very many readers go back and look at the comments a second time![]()
I work on the theory that, although most people won’t check for a response, some of them do, and others will see your appreciation and be motivated to comment accordingly. I also DM named commentators when I have the energy.