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two posts that shouldn't be cluttering the New Poetry Recommendations thread
Senna Jawa
tanka monk jazz San Jose
~ life is a private party ~
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El Folo
Virgin
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You're giving yourself way too much credit. Your poem is written poorly.Originally Posted by El Folo View Post
I'm glad you found it creepy and uneasy. It did it's job, then.
Senna Jawa
tanka monk jazz San Jose
~ life is a private party ~
Last edited by Senna Jawa : Today at 07:49 AM. Reason: cosmetic
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El Folo
Virgin
Yes, I tried to capture the spirit of the unemployed, the unwashed wretches trying to make their voice heard. I appreciate the praise Senna, god bless.Originally Posted by Senna Jawa: You're giving yourself way too much credit. Your poem is written poorly.
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