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Thank you duckiesmut for mentioning my poem in Friday's reviews
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vampiredust said:The Sunday Review
Only 6 new poems up so far
My Picks:
LasciviousSanity has an interestingly imaginative prose poem up today with her Spirals In A Bottle
rachlou gives us the sensual Flowering
MyNecroticSnail said:This I like.
You say what you fell about the poem.
You make suggestions as to possible improvements.
I am told jthserra did the same in new poems reviews, so that is most appropriate for a spinner choice.
It looks like you put a lot of work and thought into this. Keep up the good work.
I also feel Nandsan got a well deserved E. It would have been interesting to see the comments, too bad they aren't turned on.
Really the damn thing should be disconnected. Let people discover and think for themselves.LeBroz said:.
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But so far the Feedback Portal still isn't working. Wonder what sort of surprises are in store there?
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champagne1982 said:A poem for duckiesmut...
Cum On
My tits are round and luscious
wrapped around your cock,
a surrogate pussy for you to fuck.
a veritable titty fleshed sock.
Tug on my cherry-red nipples
as you glide him out and in,
warming personal lubricant,
artificial pre-cum on my skin.
I watch your face for evidence
that the time is close at hand
and baby, when that moment's here,
squirt your cum and let it land.
My tits are round and luscious
as they milk your spurting cock,
glue them together as you tremble,
with a cummy hydraulic lock.
LOL.. I hear you're cute when you shudder.duckiesmut said:Thanks. I think.
vampiredust said:I'm taking a different approach with my Sunday review and comments. I will praise when needed and will be more honest in feedback. A lot more honest.
champagne1982 said:LOL.. I hear you're cute when you shudder.
Unbridled_Passion said:Art has been busy today, so he asked me to help him out. There were 49 new poems today, and yes, I read them all, but these were the ones that called out to me
A Day of Winter in Love by LasciviousSanity
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Botany by Dale_Arden
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Hard by bluerains
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A Cry in the Night by Tony155
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The Old Man by Xowie
duckiesmut said:Thanks. I think.
champagne1982 said:LOL.. I hear you're cute when you shudder.