RachelPost
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- Feb 26, 2022
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I am working on a story with a power reversal. It involves lesbian surrender. A political candidate submits to an intern. It's not really D/s, more about control and surrender. It's not about pain, abuse, or violence. Right now, it's only an introduction to the characters, the setting of the stage, and the first sexual encounter. The story is told from the intern's first-person point of view. It's just short of 2000 words as of this moment. So nowhere close to being complete.
What I am looking for is not a copy editor, grammar and punctuation can get fixed at a later date. I just need someone to tell me if the opening of this story is any good. Please let me know if you are willing to help. If you are, let me know what format to use for the document.
I have experience writing professional works like journal articles. I am not very experienced with writing erotica. I just have this story in my head that begs to be told.
Rachel
What I am looking for is not a copy editor, grammar and punctuation can get fixed at a later date. I just need someone to tell me if the opening of this story is any good. Please let me know if you are willing to help. If you are, let me know what format to use for the document.
I have experience writing professional works like journal articles. I am not very experienced with writing erotica. I just have this story in my head that begs to be told.
Rachel