AlinaX
Story Slut
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- Feb 1, 2014
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I only would ask what or who the focus is here. Him?Opinons? After these one or two I'm going to sit down and have a long think about the excellent advice in this thread, and come back with more in a week or so,
He watches from afar
Imagining her naked
Calling for the lash
perv in the bushes
his restless hand clenching
a whip for her skin
Or her?
a flash of garter
she bares a red-lashed cheek
to tease the night