DarkOfWrite
Kink-Friendly Poet
- Joined
- Jan 17, 2024
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I've written a few of these, and thought I'd post a couple for feedback. They don't all strictly follow the rules of the genre, but any constructive feedback is welcomed. It's fine if you don't like them, just say why you don't like them (or if you do) so that I can improve.
Nude at the window
The cold glass flattens her breasts
Do the neighbours watch?
Nude at the window
The cold glass flattens her breasts
Do the neighbours watch?