needaminx
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I'm looking for feedback on my first ever submission, just to see if I should continue. So far the story has been viewed many times but no public comments. Would appreciate what you have to say, good or bad....
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=393780
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=393780