Seeking editor for Gay male, non-con, BDSM story (~3,500 words)

[Eyetheo]

Hello, I’m looking an editor for a story that’s about two men. It contains violence and non-consent. The scenario ends up being somewhat dubiously-consensual-non-consent.

I’m think the grammar is almost perfect. I’m hoping someone can read it over and point out any inconsistencies in the plot, unrealistic things, or anything else like that that pops out to you. I’ve worked on this story for months, so I don’t think it needs any big changes. Would be happy to hear any suggestions though.

Thanks!