Seeking a beta reader for chapter 1

[xxDragonBakexx]

I have already written several chapters, and spent a lot of time revising the first chapter. Before I share with the lit world, I would love to have some feed back. Anyone interested?

It is first person. Chapter 1 is set in high school. MC girlfriend learns MC had sex before dating her; she is virgin. She wants to hear about it.

 

[thomas1965]

I sent you a PM

 

[corde]

Happy to take a look .. just get in touch with me