Hi all,
I started posting my story in Nonhuman a while back, as I've added chapters I've become more comfortable with writing and I think it is improving, but the feedback comments don't help so much. My latest chapter is at
https://www.literotica.com/s/behind-the-lines-of-the-were-war-ch-06
but the whole story from the beginning runs about 15 Literotica pages so it isn't that long.
This is my first effort at creative writing in 30 years; I would appreciate any substantive feedback on my work.
Thanks all
I started posting my story in Nonhuman a while back, as I've added chapters I've become more comfortable with writing and I think it is improving, but the feedback comments don't help so much. My latest chapter is at
https://www.literotica.com/s/behind-the-lines-of-the-were-war-ch-06
but the whole story from the beginning runs about 15 Literotica pages so it isn't that long.
This is my first effort at creative writing in 30 years; I would appreciate any substantive feedback on my work.
Thanks all