Need help with AAVE / Ebonics dialogue

[MartletMartlet]

Hello, I am writing a story featuring AAVE dialogue, but I do not speak AAVE. I have looked up resources on AAVE grammar and tried to do it right but I really want a native AAVE speaker to look it over and correct any grammatical mistakes, as well as tell me if I've messed up on more nuanced things like vocabulary choice, code-switching, etc. And of course, comments to improve the story in any other way are also welcome.

The story is about futa-on-female sex slavery, so it's got nonconsent and BDSM, but it's not as miserable or dark as some other literature in this genre.

The draft is 6,000 words, though after I publish it I intend to continue with a few more chapters to make a little series, as long as reader feedback is good.

Thank you

 

[_Lynn_]

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[MartletMartlet]

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[jaF0]

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I have no idea what 'AAVE' is though.



"female sex slavery, so it's got nonconsent"


Also keep in mind that 'non-consent' here really isn't. All parties need to express some level of enjoyment and approval if you want the story to be published.

 

[MartletMartlet]

Thank you for the advice.

AAVE = African-American Vernacular English.

Also keep in mind that 'non-consent' here really isn't. All parties need to express some level of enjoyment and approval if you want the story to be published.

Yes, subby gets some enjoyment, it's not a story about cruelty.