storyteller19
Experienced
- Joined
- Aug 22, 2017
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Hello,
I am looking for an editor to my recently submitted story. It is almost 43,000 words long and is an incest story between Nathen, his older sister, and two female cousins. Since I have already submitted the story I don't mind if it will be a bit before it can get looked at. I am going through another round of edits while I wait for someone to be able to edit it. My main negative feedback was I accidentally slipped into 1st person, start too many sentences with character names instead of using pronouns, and there was some choppyness in the writing from continuity errors. the story is at 4.85 right now.
I am looking for an editor to my recently submitted story. It is almost 43,000 words long and is an incest story between Nathen, his older sister, and two female cousins. Since I have already submitted the story I don't mind if it will be a bit before it can get looked at. I am going through another round of edits while I wait for someone to be able to edit it. My main negative feedback was I accidentally slipped into 1st person, start too many sentences with character names instead of using pronouns, and there was some choppyness in the writing from continuity errors. the story is at 4.85 right now.
