Editor needed for story please

[Kateslover1234]

Hi I have written my first story about a drunken night that turned into an affair. I have submitted for but got sent back so looking for some help please

 

[AchtungNight]

I am interested. Haven’t edited in a while. Privately message me if you like. Please review the story based on the rejection letter first if you can, thx. I would prefer to know the exact reason given for rejection also. Thx.