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Her Brother's Giant Cock - The story, check it out, it's not very long.
I read this story for the first time when it came out 20 years ago, and it's still my favorite to this day. I wanted to share it, talk with others about it, and talk about why I love it so much. I suggest you read it first to follow everything I'm going to say. I could literally go through each line in this and talk about why it's great, but I'll try to keep to the more relevant points. Yes, it's still long, sorry!
On its face it's a story about a guy who gets some sex cream that changes his life. It gives him incredible sexual capabilities, including an abnormally large penis, and makes him irresistible to women. He goes on to fulfill his sexual desires. Most of the story is geared towards incest: first with his sister, then a mother and daughter threesome, and finally a foursome with them all. But it's the way this whole story is approached that makes it so great.
It's different from most incest stories I've read. Usually at least one side interested in the other, as in, actually wanting them in some way. In this, the brother and sister don't like each other at all. There's no love anywhere. Every part of the attraction plays like a chemical addiction: the unnatural lust, inexplicable decision making, incredible orgasms, even withdraw. Being told almost entirely from the women's perspectives does well to show their own confusion at what they're experiencing, and emphasizes Clark's distant attitude to the whole thing. He's like a drug dealer.
In a weird way, it's a strangely realistic story. Clark is a jerk (to say the least), a horny virgin male desperate for sex, and acts like one. It's all about his own fulfillment. The scent of the cream makes women incredibly, unnaturally horny. Like a drug. Many people will admit they've done things they wouldn't normally because they were really stupidly horny. There's even been scientific studies about it. It's this notion pushed to the extreme. The cream itself is fantastical, but the way everyone reacts to the effects is not.
The overall shift in the power dynamic is one of my favorite parts, happening over the first third of the story. Angela starts out as the attractive, more confident and sexually experienced one. She's practical but ambitious about what she wants in life. She's disparaging towards Clark. He's had no sexual experience - he's horny and desperate enough to buy sex cream on the internet. He's disrespectful to his sister, but still shy, awkward, and lacking confidence. By the end their attitudes do a complete 180.
The short intro does well to setup how they act towards each other. He often takes her stuff without asking. She barges into his room, goes through his things. She likes to tease him and admits she's almost never nice to him. He openly stares at her chest. They have no respect for each other. Angela starts her own downfall by needlessly trying to embarrass him. His door has been locked a lot lately, she rightfully assumes he's masturbating or something equally bad in there, and wants to embarrass him. The whole story could have been avoided if she hadn't tried to be so mean.
The earlier scene alluded that not only did she feel a vague, inexplicable sense of arousal in his room, she was more amicable towards him too. She sneaks in excited to embarrass him - which he is initially. But she's affected again, triggering a very strong reaction to seeing his big dick for the first time. Clark understandably freaks, knowing she's there to cause trouble. But as soon as he realizes her uncharacteristic interest seems genuine, he's anxious to find out how much more agreeable she'll be.
Clark didn't plan on any of it happening, either. As far as he's concerned it's just a fortuitous turn of events. She's his bitch sister but she's also a hot girl who's interested in his dick. He barely questions and doesn't struggle with it at all - he jumps at the possibility of his first sexual activity. If anything, he knows his sister is the last person who would do any of this with him, so if he can get her to do something, that means a lot. Her confused inner-monologue and his calm eagerness contrast nicely.
Clark's dialog in the beginning is very awkward and non-seductive, but really that's what you'd expect from someone with no experience with women. He has the chance to explain everything when Angela asks how his dick got so big, but he deflects the question. He doesn't want to risk diverting or scaring her off, he's only interested in sexual possibilities. He's a lot more interested that a girl is touching his dick, unfazed it happens to be his sister, working with it by "innocently" asking if she'd be willing to help him practice. When he sees she isn't backing away, he quickly becomes more manipulative.
If he was ever annoyed by or jealous at having a hot sister with an active sex life, that changed when it suddenly became experience he could benefit from.
Angela struggles in her head, but the extreme arousal helps her justify it to herself and agree with Clark. Again, she's not attracted to him in anyway, she still recognizes this is her annoying brother - she's compelled, chemically. Hugging probably the only thing they'd done before, she escalates everything with little directing from him. She kisses him, she presses her tongue into his mouth. This is all it takes to encourage Clark - who's only been able to look, never touch, his whole life - to clumsily grab at her butt and then breasts.
He's enjoying, but doesn't linger on anything Angela is "teaching" him. When she exposes her breasts and tells him how to do it properly, he seems only somewhat interested, then wants to move on. He's interested in kissing and foreplay mostly as a means to his own sexual gratification. It makes even more sense when you consider she interrupted him before he could finish masturbating.
Seeing how easily she responded, he takes lead and acts more direct, pushing her back to sit down on his bed (which is the same place he had her sit when she first wanted to touch his dick). He tries to make asking for a hand job seem casual, saying that he "heard the jocks at school talk about getting hand jobs from their girlfriends," like he doesn't understand what one is and her giving him one will help his "practice."
The contrast between their actions is done well. It's very apparent to Angela she's crossing a line and she's struggling not only with that, but how willingly she's doing it. Conversely, as soon as she grips his cock, his whole attitude changes. His faux-innocent, convincing tone becomes confident, condescending. "You like the feel of that big cock, don't you Angela? So, show me what the cheerleaders do to their boyfriends." He doesn't care about the details, he knows he's getting a hand job and he feels like hot shit. With the extra benefit of "dealing with" his annoying sister.
The hand job scene is great. I especially like that she starts with one hand and quickly switches to two - I bet she's never needed a second hand before. She's enthralled by what she's doing. He finishes all over her face and top. Another part is alluded here, when she swallows some and unexpectedly experiences and orgasm. Clark wouldn't even notice, to him it would just look like she really enjoyed herself.
Now Clark got what he wanted, as well as ideas for a lot more possibilities. He nonchalantly explains about the sex cream and how it's changed him physically. The way he glosses over "Something about pheromones" and "It also said that females would find me irresistible after using it for a while" implies he thinks it's the big dick, muscle tone, and clear skin that has this effect. While Angela knows the musky sweet smell triggers "lustful desire" in her, to him it's just an awful smell.
Angela asks hopefully if he's going to fuck her now, but he declines, "Not yet." Maybe he's not interested after such a big orgasm, or he's not interested in losing his virginity to his sister - or maybe because she's such a big mess now. Who knows, but he's the one controlling things now. But now he knows what she'll do and he tells her to come back the next night to get him off again, alluding to more things he wants. Presumably she then leaves.
One unspoken implication of this whole scene I like is Angela outside the room afterwards, in the hallway. Earlier she was sneaking in, intent on embarrassing him. Then, probably not 20 minutes later, she's back in the hall, dripping with her brother's cum, a lot of it, having just gone through first and second bases with him. She has to go back to her room and clean it off. And despite all of this, she's the one feeling disappointment they didn't fuck. She's confused and horny.
Angela returns every night, the pheromones feeding an already strong sexual addiction to his cock. She feels "she'd do anything for him, for it," and it only takes Clark a few days to discover that. More hand jobs, he doesn't even have to pretend to be nice about it. That first day, she's mostly clothed while he's naked. In the later scenes, she's always naked while he's half clothed. She agrees and dutifully performs, regardless of how degrading it is.
It only grows from there. As his test dummy, she discovers his pheromone laden bodily fluids cause orgasms all by themselves. Strong ones. He wants to learn to eat out women and unknowingly rocks her world with a continuous stream of pleasure. He wants a blowjob "to know how it feels" and she gives him probably the most impassioned blowjob of her life. I could write paragraphs about that scene, but this review is already too long.
Second half of review is below
I read this story for the first time when it came out 20 years ago, and it's still my favorite to this day. I wanted to share it, talk with others about it, and talk about why I love it so much. I suggest you read it first to follow everything I'm going to say. I could literally go through each line in this and talk about why it's great, but I'll try to keep to the more relevant points. Yes, it's still long, sorry!
On its face it's a story about a guy who gets some sex cream that changes his life. It gives him incredible sexual capabilities, including an abnormally large penis, and makes him irresistible to women. He goes on to fulfill his sexual desires. Most of the story is geared towards incest: first with his sister, then a mother and daughter threesome, and finally a foursome with them all. But it's the way this whole story is approached that makes it so great.
It's different from most incest stories I've read. Usually at least one side interested in the other, as in, actually wanting them in some way. In this, the brother and sister don't like each other at all. There's no love anywhere. Every part of the attraction plays like a chemical addiction: the unnatural lust, inexplicable decision making, incredible orgasms, even withdraw. Being told almost entirely from the women's perspectives does well to show their own confusion at what they're experiencing, and emphasizes Clark's distant attitude to the whole thing. He's like a drug dealer.
In a weird way, it's a strangely realistic story. Clark is a jerk (to say the least), a horny virgin male desperate for sex, and acts like one. It's all about his own fulfillment. The scent of the cream makes women incredibly, unnaturally horny. Like a drug. Many people will admit they've done things they wouldn't normally because they were really stupidly horny. There's even been scientific studies about it. It's this notion pushed to the extreme. The cream itself is fantastical, but the way everyone reacts to the effects is not.
The overall shift in the power dynamic is one of my favorite parts, happening over the first third of the story. Angela starts out as the attractive, more confident and sexually experienced one. She's practical but ambitious about what she wants in life. She's disparaging towards Clark. He's had no sexual experience - he's horny and desperate enough to buy sex cream on the internet. He's disrespectful to his sister, but still shy, awkward, and lacking confidence. By the end their attitudes do a complete 180.
The short intro does well to setup how they act towards each other. He often takes her stuff without asking. She barges into his room, goes through his things. She likes to tease him and admits she's almost never nice to him. He openly stares at her chest. They have no respect for each other. Angela starts her own downfall by needlessly trying to embarrass him. His door has been locked a lot lately, she rightfully assumes he's masturbating or something equally bad in there, and wants to embarrass him. The whole story could have been avoided if she hadn't tried to be so mean.
The earlier scene alluded that not only did she feel a vague, inexplicable sense of arousal in his room, she was more amicable towards him too. She sneaks in excited to embarrass him - which he is initially. But she's affected again, triggering a very strong reaction to seeing his big dick for the first time. Clark understandably freaks, knowing she's there to cause trouble. But as soon as he realizes her uncharacteristic interest seems genuine, he's anxious to find out how much more agreeable she'll be.
Clark didn't plan on any of it happening, either. As far as he's concerned it's just a fortuitous turn of events. She's his bitch sister but she's also a hot girl who's interested in his dick. He barely questions and doesn't struggle with it at all - he jumps at the possibility of his first sexual activity. If anything, he knows his sister is the last person who would do any of this with him, so if he can get her to do something, that means a lot. Her confused inner-monologue and his calm eagerness contrast nicely.
Clark's dialog in the beginning is very awkward and non-seductive, but really that's what you'd expect from someone with no experience with women. He has the chance to explain everything when Angela asks how his dick got so big, but he deflects the question. He doesn't want to risk diverting or scaring her off, he's only interested in sexual possibilities. He's a lot more interested that a girl is touching his dick, unfazed it happens to be his sister, working with it by "innocently" asking if she'd be willing to help him practice. When he sees she isn't backing away, he quickly becomes more manipulative.
If he was ever annoyed by or jealous at having a hot sister with an active sex life, that changed when it suddenly became experience he could benefit from.
Angela struggles in her head, but the extreme arousal helps her justify it to herself and agree with Clark. Again, she's not attracted to him in anyway, she still recognizes this is her annoying brother - she's compelled, chemically. Hugging probably the only thing they'd done before, she escalates everything with little directing from him. She kisses him, she presses her tongue into his mouth. This is all it takes to encourage Clark - who's only been able to look, never touch, his whole life - to clumsily grab at her butt and then breasts.
He's enjoying, but doesn't linger on anything Angela is "teaching" him. When she exposes her breasts and tells him how to do it properly, he seems only somewhat interested, then wants to move on. He's interested in kissing and foreplay mostly as a means to his own sexual gratification. It makes even more sense when you consider she interrupted him before he could finish masturbating.
Seeing how easily she responded, he takes lead and acts more direct, pushing her back to sit down on his bed (which is the same place he had her sit when she first wanted to touch his dick). He tries to make asking for a hand job seem casual, saying that he "heard the jocks at school talk about getting hand jobs from their girlfriends," like he doesn't understand what one is and her giving him one will help his "practice."
The contrast between their actions is done well. It's very apparent to Angela she's crossing a line and she's struggling not only with that, but how willingly she's doing it. Conversely, as soon as she grips his cock, his whole attitude changes. His faux-innocent, convincing tone becomes confident, condescending. "You like the feel of that big cock, don't you Angela? So, show me what the cheerleaders do to their boyfriends." He doesn't care about the details, he knows he's getting a hand job and he feels like hot shit. With the extra benefit of "dealing with" his annoying sister.
The hand job scene is great. I especially like that she starts with one hand and quickly switches to two - I bet she's never needed a second hand before. She's enthralled by what she's doing. He finishes all over her face and top. Another part is alluded here, when she swallows some and unexpectedly experiences and orgasm. Clark wouldn't even notice, to him it would just look like she really enjoyed herself.
Now Clark got what he wanted, as well as ideas for a lot more possibilities. He nonchalantly explains about the sex cream and how it's changed him physically. The way he glosses over "Something about pheromones" and "It also said that females would find me irresistible after using it for a while" implies he thinks it's the big dick, muscle tone, and clear skin that has this effect. While Angela knows the musky sweet smell triggers "lustful desire" in her, to him it's just an awful smell.
Angela asks hopefully if he's going to fuck her now, but he declines, "Not yet." Maybe he's not interested after such a big orgasm, or he's not interested in losing his virginity to his sister - or maybe because she's such a big mess now. Who knows, but he's the one controlling things now. But now he knows what she'll do and he tells her to come back the next night to get him off again, alluding to more things he wants. Presumably she then leaves.
One unspoken implication of this whole scene I like is Angela outside the room afterwards, in the hallway. Earlier she was sneaking in, intent on embarrassing him. Then, probably not 20 minutes later, she's back in the hall, dripping with her brother's cum, a lot of it, having just gone through first and second bases with him. She has to go back to her room and clean it off. And despite all of this, she's the one feeling disappointment they didn't fuck. She's confused and horny.
Angela returns every night, the pheromones feeding an already strong sexual addiction to his cock. She feels "she'd do anything for him, for it," and it only takes Clark a few days to discover that. More hand jobs, he doesn't even have to pretend to be nice about it. That first day, she's mostly clothed while he's naked. In the later scenes, she's always naked while he's half clothed. She agrees and dutifully performs, regardless of how degrading it is.
It only grows from there. As his test dummy, she discovers his pheromone laden bodily fluids cause orgasms all by themselves. Strong ones. He wants to learn to eat out women and unknowingly rocks her world with a continuous stream of pleasure. He wants a blowjob "to know how it feels" and she gives him probably the most impassioned blowjob of her life. I could write paragraphs about that scene, but this review is already too long.
Second half of review is below
And you're no weirder than I, who wrote a review almost half the length of the story, haha!
