ChibiFangirl
Shy Exhibistonist
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I don't know why, but these are the scenes that stump me when itv comes to writing erotic fiction. Perhaps since I'm still virginal, this could be it. However from what I am told I can write other sex scenes, like certain kinks, cunnilingus and the sex it self.
I've posted two stories on Lit so far, but I have been writing erotic fanfic and I seem to have a trend to repeat the word play from previously done series.
What I mean is all my BJ scenes look like this:
'She takes his cock, gently with her hand. Then slowly takes him in. He moans and wraps his fingers in her hair. She savors his taste until he finally comes."
^Just an example, not an actual writing sample. Tips? (Pun intended) Please?
I've posted two stories on Lit so far, but I have been writing erotic fanfic and I seem to have a trend to repeat the word play from previously done series.
What I mean is all my BJ scenes look like this:
'She takes his cock, gently with her hand. Then slowly takes him in. He moans and wraps his fingers in her hair. She savors his taste until he finally comes."
^Just an example, not an actual writing sample. Tips? (Pun intended) Please?