Feedback appreciated on a new Sex Story about meeting a long known online friend in person and having sex with her in a sex shoot

[cguysea]

Hope you read my sex story. This is part one of a four part series. Thanks for your consideration. https://literotica.com/s/long-distance-tryst-caught-on-video

 

[VerbalAbuse]

I had a look at your Philippine story. There's nothing to identify the country in the story, other than the title.
Which is bad, I guess, since a lot can be told about it.

 

[joy_of_cooking]

Quickie before I finish reading but it took me about five paragraphs to figure out that Angel was a woman. All the Angels I've ever met have been Hispanic men, and you mentioned your Angel was Filipino, so...

Try establishing people's genders faster next time. I'm still not sure whether the narrator is male or female.

 

[VerbalAbuse]

Quickie before I finish reading but it took me about five paragraphs to figure out that Angel was a woman. All the Angels I've ever met have been Hispanic men, and you mentioned your Angel was Filipino, so...

Try establishing people's genders faster next time. I'm still not sure whether the narrator is male or female.

But isn't it that all Hells Angels use the she/her pronouns when referring to themselves?