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I usually do it from a guy's, but am going to try a mother in law cheating with her daughter's husband. Should I do it from her outlook? What's the norm for these kind of stories?
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I usually do it from a guy's, but am going to try a mother in law cheating with her daughter's husband. Should I do it from her outlook? What's the norm for these kind of stories?
I usually do it from a guy's, but am going to try a mother in law cheating with her daughter's husband. Should I do it from her outlook? What's the norm for these kind of stories?
My general rule of thumb, when you are deciding from whose point of view to tell a story, is this: whose point of view presents the most conflict? Whose point of view presents the most change or growth?
I usually do it from a guy's, but am going to try a mother in law cheating with her daughter's husband. Should I do it from her outlook? What's the norm for these kind of stories?
I usually do it from a guy's, but am going to try a mother in law cheating with her daughter's husband. Should I do it from her outlook? What's the norm for these kind of stories?
Many men can't, I'd agree, but I've had many women congratulate me on my female characters.I still think that men can't really write a woman's perspective but that has been discussed over and over in this forum.
I took this section and mailed it to a friend:
"Her fear, her terror, was that one day, with some unknown animal instinct or desire, he would go, just go; and she'd never see him again... This fear was why, whenever Fleming went outside to him, her heart would thunder whenever he first stood to greet her. Then she'd take a breath and step towards him, into the shadow of his high, curving wings as he circled them around her, knowing this time she was safe. Ixtil would stand before her, his head shifting left right, left right as he always did, and she'd be safe."
And then I told him I was amazed a man could write this.
Or you could try writing it from several points of view? It just takes a bit of work on the structure, to make sure readers can follow the changes from one person's POV to another's, and to make sure it doesn't get repetitive? I tried that out for this story and it did pretty well: https://www.literotica.com/s/late-valentine-2
My general rule of thumb, when you are deciding from whose point of view to tell a story, is this: whose point of view presents the most conflict? Whose point of view presents the most change or growth?
In the story as you have described it, the mother in law is the character who will deal with the greatest internal conflict and change. She's the one from whose point of view you should tell the story.
I'm a middle-aged guy. I don't pretend to be an expert on how women see things. But, generally speaking, I think in erotica the woman's perspective is more interesting than the man's.
I've never tried writing 1st person female and not sure I ever will. The male "I" in my 1st person stories aren't actually me, but it still feels easier to take on that voice than female 1st. But challanges are interesting.
I usually do it from a guy's, but am going to try a mother in law cheating with her daughter's husband. Should I do it from her outlook? What's the norm for these kind of stories?
Stories can be told in many ways; several themes have been worked out from numerous different angles, giving each their own right of existence.
For fun, adopt the POV of a family pet observing the human goings-on. The pet is not aroused, merely curious and maybe annoyed. That's similar to a conscious cheap-motel mirror describing cheating and kinks it's witnessed.This is the primary reason I alternate narrative. (By chapter.) Different people experience say a gangbang differently.
That's similar to a conscious cheap-motel mirror describing cheating and kinks it's witnessed.
For fun, adopt the POV of a family pet observing the human goings-on. The pet is not aroused, merely curious and maybe annoyed. That's similar to a conscious cheap-motel mirror describing cheating and kinks it's witnessed.
, if you're writing a story about a gangbang in a firehouse, go to a firehouse, and talk to firemen...
I'm going to go out on a limb and suggest that no one actually does this. Like, ever.