Hi,
Just submitted my second story and it's waiting for approval. I believe my first one was ok but no one commented yet. I really like to know what you thought of it, if I should/could do something different, etc. I would love some feedback
Here's the link
http://www.literotica.com/s/riding-with-the-storm
Thanks.
Just submitted my second story and it's waiting for approval. I believe my first one was ok but no one commented yet. I really like to know what you thought of it, if I should/could do something different, etc. I would love some feedback
Here's the link
http://www.literotica.com/s/riding-with-the-storm
Thanks.