breastysadie
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I'm curious to know how I can improve my incest/taboo story "Gloryhole Surprise," about a girl who encounters her own father at a gloryhole. It's my favorite story of mine, but it needs some sharpening up.
Thanks in advance for your constructive criticism.
http://www.literotica.com/s/gloryhole-surprise-1
Thanks in advance for your constructive criticism.
http://www.literotica.com/s/gloryhole-surprise-1