TravelingThroughLife
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- Mar 20, 2016
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First I want to THANK the writers on this bulletin board for the years of reading entertainment I have enjoyed on this site. After so many great stories, I'm now considering switching from just reading, to contributing as well!
I have an idea for my first story which I'm thinking will involve an 18-year old guy getting his virginity taken by a late 20s/early 30s woman, in a hotel, the night after meeting earlier in the day by chance (This will probably be a "First Time" story but otherwise would go in "Erotic Couplings.").
I can already visualize in detail the sequence of events that will bring the two together, and how the night will go, but there are two thoughts I wanted to get the experts' opinions on:
1) I'll probably write from the third person, but want to figure out if I should have the third person narration proceed through the story "following" the male character, or go back and forth between characters every couple paragraphs when the two are apart. (The character and plot details make it easier to do one of those two than to follow primarily the female the whole story). The former would likely make the story a bit shorter, the latter might allow for more nuances and details as I build plot and characters.
2) I'm playing in my mind with the idea of having the woman be five or six months pregnant (losing her husband just after she conceived). On the one hand, it could provide an additional hormonal element to the woman's desires and show that women don't check their sexuality at the door just because they're expecting. On the other hand I worry if it will be a huge turn off for a large number of readers.
Thoughts?
I have an idea for my first story which I'm thinking will involve an 18-year old guy getting his virginity taken by a late 20s/early 30s woman, in a hotel, the night after meeting earlier in the day by chance (This will probably be a "First Time" story but otherwise would go in "Erotic Couplings.").
I can already visualize in detail the sequence of events that will bring the two together, and how the night will go, but there are two thoughts I wanted to get the experts' opinions on:
1) I'll probably write from the third person, but want to figure out if I should have the third person narration proceed through the story "following" the male character, or go back and forth between characters every couple paragraphs when the two are apart. (The character and plot details make it easier to do one of those two than to follow primarily the female the whole story). The former would likely make the story a bit shorter, the latter might allow for more nuances and details as I build plot and characters.
2) I'm playing in my mind with the idea of having the woman be five or six months pregnant (losing her husband just after she conceived). On the one hand, it could provide an additional hormonal element to the woman's desires and show that women don't check their sexuality at the door just because they're expecting. On the other hand I worry if it will be a huge turn off for a large number of readers.
Thoughts?