Editor Needed

Fantasy_Inscriber · Apr 8, 2015

Hi
I need someone to edit my story. Its my first attempt at this.
I have posted the story but need to make the grammer freaks happy.
Any help is appreciated.

I want this story edited n reposted before i start the next chapter.
Please check the story:
Transexual section: The pretty girl was much more.

Thanks

Combat323 · Apr 8, 2015

The story is here.

Fantasy_Inscriber · Apr 10, 2015

Thanks for your help

Combat323 said:
The story is here.

Haven't had much luck so far

Combat323 · Apr 10, 2015

Fantasy_Inscriber said:
Haven't had much luck so far

Be patient. It's a busy time of year for many people, especially in the worlds of academics, gardening, and honey-do lists. Spring Break is over, exams loom, the lawn needs crabgrass prevention, Mrs Combat wants everything fixed NOW, and the tax man cometh... Though I suppose most of that doesn't apply on the wrong side of the equator.

robertreams · Apr 12, 2015

Maybe you could find the help you need if you didn't belittle the very people from whom you are seeking aid. So what do we who know what we are doing call you schlock people who merely whip it out, jerk off and accept whatever comes out, then come begging to us "grammar freaks" for help? Maybe lazy writers?

Fantasy_Inscriber · Apr 12, 2015

robertreams said:
Maybe you could find the help you need if you didn't belittle the very people from whom you are seeking aid. So what do we who know what we are doing call you schlock people who merely whip it out, jerk off and accept whatever comes out, then come begging to us "grammar freaks" for help? Maybe lazy writers?

Begging you? Haha
Anyway does it make you feel better now???
Have a nice day

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