Looking for editor - Fantasy story first chapter

trenner

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Hi

I have about 5000 words and I am almost finished with the first chapter. The story includes Fm (he thinks back when he had his first woman at age 18)

The setting is fantasy (mostly a world in medieval state with little magic and such).

The sex includes oral and anal (for now)

Anyone wants to have a go and check for structure and spelling?

PM me
 
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