AnotherChance
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And no the writer is not dead or something to that effect but I wanted to take a moment and try and explain why this is a great writer, knows the subject matter and basically should be read by everyone who is into cheating with a hint of cuckold-dry.
Now before I start I just want to say I didn't learn English natively so my word usage is at it's best basic so I'm afraid I won't do the story itself justice with my vocabulary.
I chose one story to focus on by The_shadow_rising - Decorating the Newlywed.
This story focusses on Shelley Winters, 27, amazing small framed body but with big D's on it. Now some people may already be put off. Perfect doesn't exist, so it spoils the fantasy. Not to me, and the reason is, this is suppose to be perfect.
This story seems to capture that perfect moment, like an old time Clock who was ticking for the one perfect moment where all the pieces are aligned, and magic happens.
You get this right away as the writer starts the story with building it up, filling in the background, its something the writer doesn't ever really stop doing by the way. Most stories clock in around 12+ pages and you can really feel the love for the material as there is no sign of someone tagging off good story markers just to get done.
Shelly is married and she's helping decorating the house with her new husband and his friend. Now the husband is unlike a lot of stories not some wimp or woos. But actually build and with a charming personality to boot. He has money, they bought the house, and she genuinely seems to be in love with the guy.
But there's this friend of the husband, and she gets along okay with him. Nothing spectacular.
All seems perfect.
Paint runs out. Perfect husband goes out to get paint. Shelly and the friend end up painting in the same room... DAMN one of the hottest fucking scenes I have ever read on Lit!
And I can't put my finger on it because as a writer myself I was blown away by the quality of these stories.
It's like the small details, she watched him watching her. Take that sentence. How delicious is that?! Isn't that exactly how a girl thinks?!
To my mind that is like oil on a flame.
In this particular story there is a scene after she has finished blowing the friend where she sits, half her top undress, a large part of big breasts noticeable uncovered on her knees in front of the friend and the boyfriend comes back...
Now they had a water/paint fight so stuff is already a little wet with a white texture.
But there she sits, cum in her mouth hair and clothes. The friend shit eating grin on his face.
And the boyfriend doesn't notice.
And the girl's inner narration keeps on going how she is unsure how to proceed but at the same time the writer keeps reminding us in the most subtle ways that she HAS'T even swallowed yet!! Her inner dialogue goes on about how her husband would be destroyed if he found out and she doesn't even swallow... she actually smiles at him through closed mouth.
And then at the end? I won't spoil it.
Or in another where the girlfriend accidental screws another friend and she only notices his much bigger dick when she turns around and is all shell shocked. And she does this cute thing where she is in shock and puts some hair behind her ears? Like omg... what did we do? Like yes... yes that is the best use of kinetic movement a person can have at that moment.
I love, love this writer. And you should too.
Now before I start I just want to say I didn't learn English natively so my word usage is at it's best basic so I'm afraid I won't do the story itself justice with my vocabulary.
I chose one story to focus on by The_shadow_rising - Decorating the Newlywed.
This story focusses on Shelley Winters, 27, amazing small framed body but with big D's on it. Now some people may already be put off. Perfect doesn't exist, so it spoils the fantasy. Not to me, and the reason is, this is suppose to be perfect.
This story seems to capture that perfect moment, like an old time Clock who was ticking for the one perfect moment where all the pieces are aligned, and magic happens.
You get this right away as the writer starts the story with building it up, filling in the background, its something the writer doesn't ever really stop doing by the way. Most stories clock in around 12+ pages and you can really feel the love for the material as there is no sign of someone tagging off good story markers just to get done.
Shelly is married and she's helping decorating the house with her new husband and his friend. Now the husband is unlike a lot of stories not some wimp or woos. But actually build and with a charming personality to boot. He has money, they bought the house, and she genuinely seems to be in love with the guy.
But there's this friend of the husband, and she gets along okay with him. Nothing spectacular.
All seems perfect.
Paint runs out. Perfect husband goes out to get paint. Shelly and the friend end up painting in the same room... DAMN one of the hottest fucking scenes I have ever read on Lit!
And I can't put my finger on it because as a writer myself I was blown away by the quality of these stories.
It's like the small details, she watched him watching her. Take that sentence. How delicious is that?! Isn't that exactly how a girl thinks?!
To my mind that is like oil on a flame.
In this particular story there is a scene after she has finished blowing the friend where she sits, half her top undress, a large part of big breasts noticeable uncovered on her knees in front of the friend and the boyfriend comes back...
Now they had a water/paint fight so stuff is already a little wet with a white texture.
But there she sits, cum in her mouth hair and clothes. The friend shit eating grin on his face.
And the boyfriend doesn't notice.
And the girl's inner narration keeps on going how she is unsure how to proceed but at the same time the writer keeps reminding us in the most subtle ways that she HAS'T even swallowed yet!! Her inner dialogue goes on about how her husband would be destroyed if he found out and she doesn't even swallow... she actually smiles at him through closed mouth.
And then at the end? I won't spoil it.
Or in another where the girlfriend accidental screws another friend and she only notices his much bigger dick when she turns around and is all shell shocked. And she does this cute thing where she is in shock and puts some hair behind her ears? Like omg... what did we do? Like yes... yes that is the best use of kinetic movement a person can have at that moment.
I love, love this writer. And you should too.