StrangeTamer
Really Really Experienced
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- Jan 26, 2016
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Hi everyone, like the title says I would like some feedback on my story Rebirth (Reworked). I took the feedback from the original and rewrote the story and I think it works a lot better now. It's in Sci-Fi and Fantasy it's 8 lit pages and almost 29000 words. It's a lesbian love story between a sex goddess and a mortal female. https://www.literotica.com/s/rebirth-reworked