Thank you for that sir: )That's a bit of a brainweave at that. Ok, it'll have to be tomorrow. I already re-posted it as raw text as staff said they didn't like my RTF format (even after they said they DO take RTF submits). Grmbl ...
I'll add exactly what you requested though then and post as a SECOND chapter. Wow, I might actually have ONE of my stories accepted by then.
Congrats! I read it earlier. While it's not my type of content, it was very well constructed, and had a pretty good plot.
I just read it. I want to thank you again for making this story, and I look forward to your next part. "Dirty Streak" part 1 was perfectly written, and an excellent setup fot the sequel. The only issues I have with it is how much emphasis you put into the...um...er...port a potty content. I'm not trying to be ungrateful, but including all of the fluids messed with the overall erotic atmosphere that usually comes with all the site's stories. Another problem is that you focused less on the streaking part, and more on the port a potty situation, which would be a very good idea if you are planning on saving all the eroticism for part 2, and was just focusing on setting up the whole. Also, please remember that the the kind of stories I suggested is about streaking, along with flashing, sharking, and any other exhibitionistic acts, going wrong/resulting in the men being caught, sexually punished, and left feeling humiliated a little afterwards.
Well when/if you make a story about it, please let me know and tell what the title is.
These sound like great ideas. WOuld you like to write stories like that? If you do, please let me know.
That sounds real interesting. Do you think you might want to write a story based on that?Oh, the fond memories…
Your idea reminds me of a park near the building where I once did some studies. It was notorious for the wankers who used to lurk in the shadows, and who'd expose themselves & masturbate whenever girls passed by.
The difference being, none of us felt the urge to strip them naked or f… them.
That's obviously a male fantasy.
1. No not in that regards, but if they were trench coat flashing, sharking etc then yes.
I didn't mean to insult your kinks, it's just that even though mine tend to switch up every day, creativity with bodily fluids has never been one of them. I look forward to your next part, and if your interested in writing more stories about flashing/streaking/exhibitionism that leads to sexual abuse, and humiliation, could you send a reply. Also if you wanna see anymore of my ideas, i have set up a thread called "Nephlim's Story Ideas 09/13/154". If you want to look em up and see if there are any you want to write here is the link.We all have our kinks, Nephlim. Me ? I was given so many toilet swirlies by bullies back in elementary, middle, and high-school, I felt certain I was going to grow gills before I entered college.
There was one girl I fell in love with who held my hand back in elementary school as I was swirled by other girls in their restroom every week on Wednesdays, during recess. She held my hand for support because I told her I was scared of the toilet's flushing sound.
Her holding my hand was the greatest feeling in the world. Even to today I believe holding someone's hand is the greatest act of kindness one can ever show another.
It is the memories of when we are young and abused that are the strongest schisms or fetishes for us today. I am certain of this ...
I posted the 2nd part as part of an edit of the 1st. It works out quite nicely including Nate making friends with one of the police force, a woman named Officer Darnell.
As for Buford's Father, I made him the chief of police and the dean is now his uncle. Buford does get his as well. All is explained there.
I didn't mean to insult your kinks, it's just that even though mine tend to switch up every day, creativity with bodily fluids has never been one of them. I look forward to your next part, and if your interested in writing more stories about flashing/streaking/exhibitionism that leads to sexual abuse, and humiliation, could you send a reply. Also if you wanna see anymore of my ideas, i have set up a thread called "Nephlim's Story Ideas 09/13/154". If you want to look em up and see if there are any you want to write here is the link.We all have our kinks, Nephlim. Me ? I was given so many toilet swirlies by bullies back in elementary, middle, and high-school, I felt certain I was going to grow gills before I entered college.
There was one girl I fell in love with who held my hand back in elementary school as I was swirled by other girls in their restroom every week on Wednesdays, during recess. She held my hand for support because I told her I was scared of the toilet's flushing sound.
Her holding my hand was the greatest feeling in the world. Even to today I believe holding someone's hand is the greatest act of kindness one can ever show another.
It is the memories of when we are young and abused that are the strongest schisms or fetishes for us today. I am certain of this ...
I posted the 2nd part as part of an edit of the 1st. It works out quite nicely including Nate making friends with one of the police force, a woman named Officer Darnell.
As for Buford's Father, I made him the chief of police and the dean is now his uncle. Buford does get his as well. All is explained there.
