EroticaGaussia
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Hi there,
I have written a couple of short fantasy stories but want to start submitting accounts of my time as a Dominant. These are true stories - memoirs would be a better term - and I'd like some constructive feedback.
The first one is below - it is quite short and intended as an introduction. Thank you all in advance.
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[Please do not post entire story on the Forum. You can either ask for feedback for a snippet (maximum three paragraphs) or on a story which is already posted on Literotica Website.]
I have written a couple of short fantasy stories but want to start submitting accounts of my time as a Dominant. These are true stories - memoirs would be a better term - and I'd like some constructive feedback.
The first one is below - it is quite short and intended as an introduction. Thank you all in advance.
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[Please do not post entire story on the Forum. You can either ask for feedback for a snippet (maximum three paragraphs) or on a story which is already posted on Literotica Website.]
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