That's better than those who don't take no for an answer.
"I'd love to role play with you!"
"No, thank you."
"Are you sure?"
"Yes."
"Are you sure?"
"I hate role play."
"Are you sure?"
. . .
Are you sure?
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That's better than those who don't take no for an answer.
"I'd love to role play with you!"
"No, thank you."
"Are you sure?"
"Yes."
"Are you sure?"
"I hate role play."
"Are you sure?"
. . .
Are you sure?
Impressive story.With all my stories and the time they have been up, I have had some great comments but the one that has stuck with me the most was an e-mail i received from a blind vet on Blindmans Bluff.
He asked if I was also blind as I had nailed the blind character perfectly. He also wanted to know where I had come up with the idea of a sonic reference marker. I told him it had come to me as I wrote the story. Through him and an organization for blind vets, the sonic reference devise is now available for free to anyone who is blind. They have improved the thing by making it solar powered and activated by a small remote. If a blind person gets disoriented all they do is press the button and the sound guides them to a known reference point.
I didn't know it at the time but he took my story to the national blind veterans convention in Washington that year. I ended up with hundreds of e-mails in praise of the story. To bad they didn't come to Lit to vote.
In any case, I had been legally blind for several months before i wrote this story. Cataracts in my one good eye. Luckily they operated on it and my sight was restored. I'm glad so much good and goodwill came of the story.
Impressive story.
I won't claim that this is the best compliment I've ever gotten on a story, but it's the best compliment I've received on a story today.
Impressive story.
Are you sure you want my fist up your ass??
(Shit... That sounded a little like role play. Oops)
Dollie---------- It sounded a bit painful to me.That sounds a bit uncomfortable, think I'll have to pass.
(And you're right, it did sound a little like role play lol)
Yes! It was very flattering until I realized he didn't actually mean any of it. He stopped talking to me when I made it clear I don't do "chat".
From an Anonymous reader, for All I Need Part 2:
"Anomic - defiance of social norm - truly an elegant handle.
You share with us your rapturous love of words,
a quick and delicate wit, and a lyrical elegance that
makes every single sentence silly with pleasure.
Anyone who lives to read your writing will want to
lick your penmanship and sleep with it between their legs."
Mandy01
Omg, I have never felt so torn in my life.
Thank you for giving me the ride of a lifetime. I did make a mistake by deciding to read this marvellous piece at work...don't worry I have my perks, an office manager. The problem I had was when someone came into my office and saw me crying, actually bawling, they thought I had got some terrible news.
I showed them what I was reading and before long, I had streams of workers clamouring to know why there was now two of us in tears.
After consulting with the boss, I sent out an inter-office memo with the story’s URL. You guessed it, the whole office was brought to a standstill. The boss has given everyone the rest of the day off with pay; can you believe that?
He’s certainly no scrooge, but tried to make out he was by saying that he wanted to go home himself, and didn’t trust us not to rob him blind...The bugger goes to golf anytime he wants and now he’s worried...lol
From myself and the staff of our office here, we would like to thank you and yours for a wonderful Christmas story, and wish everyone a Merry Christmas and a happy holiday season.
Amanda
Double bitch slap of reality here on the true love front. A great little journey into the heart of darkness, beautifully told.
I don't know if this was my best comment, but I still find it amusing:
Gross
I keep reading this horrible story hoping to find out it was a man and wife role playing (even then it would be gross though). You are a sick pervert and I hope you stay far away from children!
It was from anymouse, of course, and a tale of incest between father and 20 year-old daughter.
Outstanding way of creating a sex-positive version of a story that so often just sounds trashy. Nice job! Looking forward to the next installment.
Beyond the certain amount of disbelief one usually has to suspend to enjoy a teacher/student story, I had only one thing to share. I felt like Caleb was a little to quick to let the profanity flow in his teacher,s presence, and it made me cringe reflexively a few times. It didn't fit with the sweetness of his personality and the usual inhibition innate in a student's conversation with a teacher. After they started to cross that line, the colorful language made more sense and that transition in vocabulary could have been used to illustrate the change in their relationship, as you did when Penny started being freer with those words. Nevertheless, good story. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you for posting it.
My best three comments were "This is probably the best story I have read on this site"