ChloeTzang
Literotica Guru
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- Apr 14, 2015
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And I just got this one on "Sammi Woo" along with a one star bomb. I'm leaving it there for entertainment.
Why do you get 5s?
Your prose is atrocious, the vernacular used so obviously that of a teenager (v-card, really?) and the grammar is abysmal. The constant repetition removes any kind of tempo. After reading this I went and scanned some other pieces of yours. If this piece is an example of writing that was improved by editing, I shudder to consider the original.
Why do you get 5s?
Your prose is atrocious, the vernacular used so obviously that of a teenager (v-card, really?) and the grammar is abysmal. The constant repetition removes any kind of tempo. After reading this I went and scanned some other pieces of yours. If this piece is an example of writing that was improved by editing, I shudder to consider the original.