netflixandclits
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Hey everyone!
So recently we posted a story that hasn't done as well as the others (hovering at a 4/4.1-ish rating). We've never broken the 4.5/hall of fame threshold yet, but I did think that this piece would be a comfortable 4.2/3. Would love to hear your comments on what you think can be improved.
Personally, I think it's a combination of a very 'vanilla' premise that's seen quite often (though this story wasn't aspiring to be more) and its short length. I thought that the solid writing might carry it through, but maybe there's room for improvement in that department as well.
Thanks for taking the time to check it out
https://www.literotica.com/s/released-tension
So recently we posted a story that hasn't done as well as the others (hovering at a 4/4.1-ish rating). We've never broken the 4.5/hall of fame threshold yet, but I did think that this piece would be a comfortable 4.2/3. Would love to hear your comments on what you think can be improved.
Personally, I think it's a combination of a very 'vanilla' premise that's seen quite often (though this story wasn't aspiring to be more) and its short length. I thought that the solid writing might carry it through, but maybe there's room for improvement in that department as well.
Thanks for taking the time to check it out
https://www.literotica.com/s/released-tension
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