Your First Comment?

[joy_of_cooking]

How are people adding these titles to their comments? I only see the one text field when I go to write a comment.

 

[MelissaBaby]

How are people adding these titles to their comments? I only see the one text field when I go to write a comment.

I think the title bar disappeared in the last update.

 

[Devinter]

My first comment was someone that simply wrote "Part 2?", wanting me to write a continuation.

EDIT: Also, what is this?

 

[Rob_Royale]

My first comment was someone that simply wrote "Part 2?", wanting me to write a continuation.

EDIT: Also, what is this?

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I think you went back in time.

 

[mirafrida]

My first story has been hovering close to 4.49 for a long time, but has never for even a day (I'm pretty sure) made it to "hot"

Still, it's gotten many views, likes, and nice comments over the years. This was the first

Very good story
Well written with a good erotic build up.

 

[AchtungNight]

The earliest recorded comment I have on Lit is from 2009, someone anonymous asking if I could continue my Eliza Dushku fanfic Hunters & Prey where she ambushes and seduces a paparazzo stalker modeled off Owen Wilson.

Uh, sorry, but Eliza is out of the acting business these days and Gary the paparazzo has never been more than a recurring ineffectual sympathetic antagonist to me. They didn’t work out long term. Still, maybe when she wanted to burn Michael Weatherly for sexually harassing her a few years ago, Gary helped? I’d like to think so.

Here is the story if anyone is interested- https://literotica.com/s/hunters-and-prey

 

[Duleigh]

In another thread, there was a discussion about first followers. That made me wonder about the first comment on my first story.

Here's mine. What was yours?


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I received a comment a bit longer ago than that. Comments had a title back in the dark ages

He was obviously a wise, astute reader.

 

[Omenainen]

Mine was

Good start

by BigHornyMe on 05/07/2020
If this was your first attempt on writing an erotic story, you've come out smelling of roses. This was very, very good! Can't wait to read more from you.

I appreciate the positive comments on my early stories a lot. I’m relatively certain that if I’d had some complaints, I would’ve thought I can’t write English sufficiently well for this and would have walked away. Since then I haven’t been as impacted, but also I don’t remember ever getting very negative comments.

 

[StillStunned]

EDIT: Also, what is this?

Different time zones, I think. Often when I visit the forums, I'm not automatically logged in. It takes going into the AH, or sometimes even clicking on a thread, before I'm logged in. Until that time the page is set to UK time instead of CET.

 

[Devinter]

Different time zones, I think. Often when I visit the forums, I'm not automatically logged in. It takes going into the AH, or sometimes even clicking on a thread, before I'm logged in. Until that time the page is set to UK time instead of CET.

Hmmm.. But I got that showing up directly after posting. So that would mean there's a time-zone just 5 minutes different from mine! I think the Time Travel theory that Rob put forward seems more likely.

 

[lc69hunter]

Anonymous over 1 year ago
Trying to justify having no concept of love, respect or dignity. What a pathetic excuse for a man.

 

[alohadave]

My first comment was someone that simply wrote "Part 2?", wanting me to write a continuation.

EDIT: Also, what is this?

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It's a probabilistic calculation of when the comment will be visible to readers. It's best to pretend it doesn't exist.

 

[lovecraft68]

Almost Perfect BDSM(Femdom)

Was O.K. but by the end....

by Pistolpackinpete  on 05/13/2010
she was just wasting a chance to get a truly devoted slave by trying to break him.
m.

 

[Paul_Chance]

My first comment:

Edit Please

by Anonymous user on 01/17/2012
misspellings and changes of tense were too distracting. Edit your stuff more carefully.

The vaunted Anonymous was absolutely correct - I did a shitty job of editing my first couple of stories. Lesson learned.

 

[FifthEstate]

by Anonymous user on 03/18/2018

Lol I enjoyed reading this. I'm a 5'5" d cup blonde blue eyed girl who went to ucla and lived in sunset lol. I never dated the quarter back but my roommate did.

I thought I had hit the jackpot that hot sounding former UCLA D-cup coed’s were reading my stories…little did I know that most of my future comments would be from fat middle-aged guys asking “When the fuck is chapter 4 gonna publish?”

 

[MediocreAuthor]

I don't have my first comment, because I deleted it. But it was an old, impotent man telling me that he would never read anything I wrote, because I mistook "shudder" for "shutter".

Now, you may think that I am insulting him by calling him impotent. Nope. He said so right in his bio: "completely impotent". His words.

I hope he's doing well.

@Comshaw, you were the first person he ever followed, btw

 

[Jackie.Hikaru]

by Anonymous user on 03/18/2018

Lol I enjoyed reading this. I'm a 5'5" d cup blonde blue eyed girl who went to ucla and lived in sunset lol. I never dated the quarter back but my roommate did.

I thought I had hit the jackpot that hot sounding UCLA D-cup coed’s were reading my stories…little did I know that most of my future comments would be from fat middle-aged guys asking “When the fuck is chapter 4 gonna publish?”

Go bruins!

 

[Stimtheone]

I had much more inspiring ones later, but this one did touch me. Made on chapter one of Deviant Empire. While I did aim to have some comedic elements, I always worried that this user might have seen the work as something else.

 

[KenNicottii]

My very first story, Sisters in the Night (ten years ago), has two sisters seducing a male friend of theirs. I posted to the Group Sex category. I specifically excluded any incest between the two sisters – not the story I was writing.

I eagerly awaited its publication and was stunned when the site reassigned it to Incest/Taboo. I knew that true I/T connoisseurs would scream foul. So, here’s my very first ever comment on Literotica, from Anonymous:

Standard threesome story, where's the incest?
Absolutely no incest value other than the occasional touch between the sisters, this should be in the 'erotic encounters' section, as it could have been lifted straight from the pages of Playboy or Oui, and has none of the sense of an illicit encounter that makes the Incest & Taboo genre so spicy

This set off a series of comments from readers claiming “yes, it is” or “no, it isn’t”. Those who liked it didn’t care – some said it was incest, others said it wasn’t.

I was so new to Lit that I didn’t know there was a possibility of an appeal to reassign the story to Group Sex. I just moved on and concentrated on writing my next story. It’s my lowest rated story (4.59) so far. However, the number of views is three times (!) the average views of my other eight stories.

I really don’t get the appeal of I/T and the huge amount of stories (65K!) on Lit. But if I ever get a story idea that fits, I’ll proudly post to that category.

Epilogue: Seven years after publication, a reader found this story somehow and commented:

Now that....
was a near perfect threesome, MFF. None of this where the women are enjoying each other and the guy comes in when they want him to. Then he's just a boy toy. Good job Ken.....

Moral of the story: “Some days, the candy—some days, the wrapper.”