Parhelical
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- Jun 13, 2022
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Stories on Literotica end with the author's name and a link to their profile, then a "Please rate this story", then a field for comments, then an ad for "live webcams". Falling away into unconstructed space isn't an option; it's just a question of what goes above the author's name/link.
Well sure, but I'm not going to intuitively read a username or report button and integrate it into the narrative.
The last sentence of a story should be deliberate. It should give us cause to reflect back across the narrative. 'The End' doesn't do that, it's the equivalent of being rushed out of the theater. Effectively it's telling the reader: 'don't linger, read this instead.'