femmeologia
Virgin
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- Oct 10, 2026
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Hey folks! Decided to put my writing out there and start posting some write ups of my escapades.
One of my stories has ranked quite a bit lower than the others and I’m trying to figure out why. It is focused on kink than sex (it is in the BDSM category), and does involve some less mainstream kinks (needle play, shock collars, staples).
I don’t think? the writing quality is that much different than my other stories but maybe I’m missing something. I would love some feedback, both on what might not be working for this story, and in general. Erotica is quite a new genre for me and I’m enjoying dipping my toes in. Thanks in advance for your constructive feedback!
https://www.literotica.com/s/i-m-thinking-of-being-mean
One of my stories has ranked quite a bit lower than the others and I’m trying to figure out why. It is focused on kink than sex (it is in the BDSM category), and does involve some less mainstream kinks (needle play, shock collars, staples).
I don’t think? the writing quality is that much different than my other stories but maybe I’m missing something. I would love some feedback, both on what might not be working for this story, and in general. Erotica is quite a new genre for me and I’m enjoying dipping my toes in. Thanks in advance for your constructive feedback!
https://www.literotica.com/s/i-m-thinking-of-being-mean
