Writer collaboration

[LovesDancing]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

 

[Rob_Royale]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

You are thinking way to hard into it. No reader is going to worry about that. They only care that it's well written.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Maybe simply find a female editor who smoothes out your male gaze where it is jarring.
Or you can distinguish the two by their approach to problem-solving. One more analytical, the other more intuitive. Or different word choice "her cunt" vs "my pussy". "my cock" vs "his member".

 

[Jay142]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

I've written a few stories where I collaborated with a female author. The Hannah and Melissa series are examples. I think having a female perspective helped the stories immensely. I shared a Google Doc and gave them the freedom to edit by writing. You can find the stories here: https://www.literotica.com/authors/Jay142/works/stories

 

[Naughty_Natalie]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

That’s an interesting idea. It could make for a better story and, with the right collaborators, be a lot of fun.

 

[Carnevil9]

If you don't find a female collaborator, you might try what worked for me: I wanted to write a story in first person from a female character's perspective. So I imagined a (real life) female friend of mine was telling me the story, and I wrote it as she would have told it. I think it worked pretty well.

 

[KindredFlame]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

Ok this sounds interesting. When you say long story. How long are we talking? I assume you want to someone to look at parts of the story that is already written. Am I right?

 

[gothkellie]

You are thinking way to hard into it. No reader is going to worry about that. They only care that it's well written.

A woman's brain is different than a mans. AI robots are not unisexual brainwise. So humans are vastly different, even as writers.

 

[Rob_Royale]

A woman's brain is different than a mans. AI robots are not unisexual brainwise. So humans are vastly different, even as writers.

True. But again, the reader doesn't care. They just want a well written story. Trying to capture two different writing styles for the POVs is too much effort for too little return.

And what does AI have to do with this post?