Writer collaboration

[LovesDancing]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

 

[Rob_Royale]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

You are thinking way to hard into it. No reader is going to worry about that. They only care that it's well written.

 

[Andreas_Kreuz]

Maybe simply find a female editor who smoothes out your male gaze where it is jarring.
Or you can distinguish the two by their approach to problem-solving. One more analytical, the other more intuitive. Or different word choice "her cunt" vs "my pussy". "my cock" vs "his member".

 

[Jay142]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

I've written a few stories where I collaborated with a female author. The Hannah and Melissa series are examples. I think having a female perspective helped the stories immensely. I shared a Google Doc and gave them the freedom to edit by writing. You can find the stories here: https://www.literotica.com/authors/Jay142/works/stories

 

[Naughty_Natalie]

I've written a long story where I tried to give both sides of a man and woman's versions of what happened. The problem is that both sides of the story are written using my own style, the words and sentences the same. Has there been very many stories where one author has created a story from a mans point of view and then submitted it to a female author who uses her own sentence style, her own words to give the woman's version of what happened?

That’s an interesting idea. It could make for a better story and, with the right collaborators, be a lot of fun.