Write me a story challenge!

[KillerMuffin]

Muffie said in Sarah's thread:

Depends on the venue. For Lit, these are my spelling choices:

orgasm:

n. cum
v. cum, cums, cumming, came

move toward:

v. come, comes, coming, came

I prefer to differentiate between the two because "I'm cumming!" has a completely different meaning than "I'm coming!" and I don't like to leave meaning and connotation up to context when I can actually use a word to show the reader what's what.

WSO said:

There's a story in them thar words! (She watches too much Gomer Pyle. )


So, the Wild Sweet One Cum challenge:

Write a story of at least 750 words that gives us a look at the differences and the samenesses of "I'm cumming!" and "I'm coming!"

 

[wildsweetone]

i knew i shoulda stayed in bed...

i'll write one if you write one KM

 

[KillerMuffin]

Deal.



Shall we say, participles at dawn? *chortle* I've always wanted to say that.

 

[wildsweetone]

Say anything you like! Just so long as I can bring my alliterative abstractitis

*busy lookin' up 'participles'*

I've begun mine with a writing exercise - combining two jobs in one

'On Monday she came home...' sound boring enough?

*wondering how the hell I got in this corner* I didn't even see it cumming! rofl

 

[Guest]

Oh this is going to be good.........

Better than the budwiser commercial.........

I can hardly wait to see the cummings and goings on this one!


I remain, (excitedly awaiting the outcum)

 

[wildsweetone]

*holding my tongue, shaking my head*

You're going to watch, Sandman?

*gulp*

 

[Guest]

Oh hell yes!

I wouldn't miss this for the world!

 

[KillerMuffin]

So you're gonna type us up a little ditty, too, sandman?

 

[wildsweetone]

1600+ words and i've lost count of how many of them begin with 'c' rofl.

i'll give it a couple of days, then check it for typos and hmm do we submit the stories or are we posting them in the thread?

 

[KillerMuffin]

1,120 words.

I just submitted it. "I'm Coming!" Should show up in a few days.

You can do what you wanna.

 

[Guest]

Cum again?

Are you kidding KM? I wouldn't stand a chance.........

 

[KillerMuffin]

Huh?

You're the guy firmly kicking my butt in the author of the year thing. Stand a chance. Pfiffle.

 

[Guest]

Hmmmmmm

As Km strokes Thesandman's manhood....er ah, I mean ego.

I might have to give some thought to this.......<smile>. Though as I am leaving for Maui Tuesday morning, you might have to wait until I get back.


I remain,

 

[wildsweetone]

help please...

i wish to submit in the Lit submit box by using my the copy and paste method. i have a couple of sentences that need putting in italics. what codes do i use to save Laurel having to find and sort them?

is it the same italics,
[ i ] and [ / i ] as in these posts? (not that i can get them to work around the word 'italics' at the moment. rofl)

 

[Guest]

Do this instead kiddo....

It's easier........

Save your file into "text only" copy. Then submit. Now you can go back..."edit" and insert whatever you'd like. Just re-save by hiting the submit key again once you've edited your changes. Save's Laurel a hell of a lot of work.

 

[wildsweetone]

i know that's english... i just can't focus my eyeballs on it. lol

i'll give it a go dad, thanks

 

[wildsweetone]

okay now i spend untold sleepless nights tossing and turning, wondering how badly beat up i'm gonna look by the end of the month.

i've submitted 'Homecoming' (darn original title, i thought) at 1723 words.

now i'll just go sit in my corner and weep.

 

[Guest]

Actually.........

I'm rather excited.........

Hopefully I'll have two <fun> interesting and <amusing> stories to read when I get back from Maui.

Homecuming vs I'm coming.......er, cumming, whatever. Either way it's bound to be very climatic!


I remain,

 

[wildsweetone]

okay here's mine...

Homecoming


I can't find yours yet KM... Odd how mine's gone up already and yours isn't there... I might be looking in the wrong places though.

For anybody that's interested, Homecoming is showing on my list as 4.42, with 12 votes and 993 views - (incredibly huge amount of voting for a first day - I can't understand it.)

(edited to add -four and a half hours later and got one of the 1 votes overwith - gotta love predictability 4.31, with 13 votes and 993 views)