Wife. Mother. Lover. Pimp.

[lit_ch3]

Woman injured in accident. Bedridden. Never walk again. Can't have sex. Husband's very supportive. Tells her not to worry.

She confides in neighbor. Brags on his pussy-eating prowess. Turns out she's not getting any from her husband.

Wife "loans" him out. Word gets around. Wife starts charging money.

What do you all think?

 

[Buffy47]

So the husband becomes a male Prostitute for local women pimped out by his Disabled wife due to she can't work and they can't lose the house.


Interesting story maybe can add Cuckqueen into it

 

[DarkSollat]

Eeee, how she can never have sex but being able to receive oral?

 

[lit_ch3]

So the husband becomes a male Prostitute for local women pimped out by his Disabled wife due to she can't work and they can't lose the house.


Interesting story maybe can add Cuckqueen into it

was thinking more along lines the insurance settlement took care of most things, he didn't know how much she was charging and after a while his "earnings" bought him a Porsche....

 

[Buffy47]

was thinking more along lines the insurance settlement took care of most things, he didn't know how much she was charging and after a while his "earnings" bought him a Porsche....

Nothing wrong with a porsche, the story will need a reason to be charging for money either desperate measures or greed for wealth so I'm glad you have thought about that aspect.

 

[FantasySharer1]

Would love it if she pimps out to her family members.
Her sisters.
Her nieces.
Her mother.
Her aunts.

They step in to take over the sexual load of satisfying her husband and the home turns into a revolving door of her female relatives getting constantly fucked by him.

 

[lit_ch3]

Eeee, how she can never have sex but being able to receive oral?

There's an idea....

 

[lit_ch3]

Would love it if she pimps out to her family members.
Her sisters.
Her nieces.
Her mother.
Her aunts.

They step in to take over the sexual load of satisfying her husband and the home turns into a revolving door of her female relatives getting constantly fucked by him.

all kinds of options....

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's always a hot idea. The disability is a bit of a downer for me and I think would be depressing for the character and the reader. How about just a good cuckquean story. Wife has a close friend in her social circle who is lonely and she suggests she go out with her and her husband. At the last minute she gets a "headache" and only the husband shows, but he's got orders to seduce the friend if he can. They have a delightful "date" and he walks her to her door and then kisses her goodnight.

Long story short, he starts "dating" several of her friends as a "hot-husband", sometimes in their home with her watching. Afterward she reclaims her man and epic sex results.

 

[Buffy47]

It's a good idea but that probably needs it's own story idea post as nothing like the Original idea he put out there.

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's a good idea but that probably needs it's own story idea post as nothing like the Original idea he put out there.

True enough, but no one seems to mind if the original premise gets morphed a bit, because we all don't have the same tastes and kinks. I'd be happy to delete it if the OP was unhappy with what I added.

 

[Buffy47]

True enough, but no one seems to mind if the original premise gets morphed a bit, because we all don't have the same tastes and kinks. I'd be happy to delete it if the OP was unhappy with what I added.

I always liked idea of setting multiple stories using same characters so both could happen

 

[Rob_Royale]

I always liked idea of setting multiple stories using same characters so both could happen

Yes, I could see the fun in that. Get a few writers, set up some characters, and a setting, and let each one tell their story independently.

 

[Buffy47]

All with common themes. Characters, locality, descriptions of certain things to merge them but all with their own story arc

 

[CuttingEdge]

True enough, but no one seems to mind if the original premise gets morphed a bit, because we all don't have the same tastes and kinks. I'd be happy to delete it if the OP was unhappy with what I added.

I always figure it was "Stories Ideas" so nothing is ever cast in stone.

Typically in any short story or novel, what the author envisions the story to be in the beginning, is vastly different then when it is finished, so why shouldn't ideas on here morph too?

Just as an example, in a novel I am writing now, I originally had the main character in bed with her boyfriend when her father comes home thinking he is the city's bomber. To protect his daughter, he ends up holding him at gun point. It was okay, but later in the story I needed her to be a strong swimmer, so I changed her having swimming trophies in her bedroom that the boyfriend admires before he has sex with her, but then changed them skinny-dipping when the father comes home. It's a much better setting, has far more tension, and makes the novel more plausible in a later scene when she nearly drowns in a river.

Morphing stories is a good thing, and really is any story ever really done? We just kind of pick a point where we stop working on them, and move to another one.

 

[Buffy47]

I always figure it was "Stories Ideas" so nothing is ever cast in stone.

Typically in any short story or novel, what the author envisions the story to be in the beginning, is vastly different then when it is finished, so why shouldn't ideas on here morph too?

Just as an example, in a novel I am writing now, I originally had the main character in bed with her boyfriend when her father comes home thinking he is the city's bomber. To protect his daughter, he ends up holding him at gun point. It was okay, but later in the story I needed her to be a strong swimmer, so I changed her having swimming trophies in her bedroom that the boyfriend admires before he has sex with her, but then changed them skinny-dipping when the father comes home. It's a much better setting, has far more tension, and makes the novel more plausible in a later scene when she nearly drowns in a river.

Morphing stories is a good thing, and really is any story ever really done? We just kind of pick a point where we stop working on them, and move to another one.

I fully agree and Tolkien is a good example of how a story can change and characters having to change direction simply to keep a plot idea plausible.

I just assumed the original idea was fairly fixed as it was put out into the thread as bullet pointed ideas and then rejected an idea as already fixed the idea of having insurance and wanting to buy a porshe

 

[CuttingEdge]

I fully agree and Tolkien is a good example of how a story can change and characters having to change direction simply to keep a plot idea plausible.

I just assumed the original idea was fairly fixed as it was put out into the thread as bullet pointed ideas and then rejected an idea as already fixed the idea of having insurance and wanting to buy a porshe

Oh yeah, I knew what you were saying. Sometimes I write for others reading because 99% of people on a forum, never reply, so knowing that, I make points for them.

Myself, I kind of plot out a story, but yet kind of write by the seat of my pants too, because I get better ideas as I go along. My first drafts tend to be quite boring. On redrafts, I have a program that helps me edit, and it asks, "How can I make this worse for my character?" How can I surprise the reader?"

In my example above, a huge part of the novel is a father not wanting to see his daughter grow up, even though she is 24 years old. To catch her in bed with her boyfriend, in the father's house is bad enough, but to be skinny-dipping just makes it worse. In bed, she can just grab a blanket and tell her dad to get out of her room. Skinny-dipping in her parents pool makes it FAR worse, even though it is a mainstream book and not inappropriate at all. The reader can just picture it all happening and being so embarrassed for her.

 

[Buffy47]

Oh yeah, I knew what you were saying. Sometimes I write for others reading because 99% of people on a forum, never reply, so knowing that, I make points for them.

Myself, I kind of plot out a story, but yet kind of write by the seat of my pants too, because I get better ideas as I go along. My first drafts tend to be quite boring. On redrafts, I have a program that helps me edit, and it asks, "How can I make this worse for my character?" How can I surprise the reader?"

In my example above, a huge part of the novel is a father not wanting to see his daughter grow up, even though she is 24 years old. To catch her in bed with her boyfriend, in the father's house is bad enough, but to be skinny-dipping just makes it worse. In bed, she can just grab a blanket and tell her dad to get out of her room. Skinny-dipping in her parents pool makes it FAR worse, even though it is a mainstream book and not inappropriate at all. The reader can just picture it all happening and being so embarrassed for her.

Sounds like you have a good system in place to push your storytelling to a higher level of enjoyment.

An interesting place to take a story because all parents know if you put something into your home then the family will find away to use them for something not intended. In this instance yes a pool in the yard will always become a late night skinny dipping location. I blame the father for seting up romantic under water lighting and a mini bar near by.

A father will always be a hypocrite he likes porn and hot girls but refuses to admit his daughter is same age as the girls on screen. He and wife skinny dipped yet refuses to accept his daughter would do same.

 

[penshockey1983]

Yes, I could see the fun in that. Get a few writers, set up some characters, and a setting, and let each one tell their story independently.

I wouldn't mind writing some version of this.....

 

[Rob_Royale]

I wouldn't mind writing some version of this.....

I have an idea. Stand by.

 

[CuttingEdge]

Sounds like you have a good system in place to push your storytelling to a higher level of enjoyment.

An interesting place to take a story because all parents know if you put something into your home then the family will find away to use them for something not intended. In this instance yes a pool in the yard will always become a late night skinny dipping location. I blame the father for seting up romantic under water lighting and a mini bar near by.

A father will always be a hypocrite he likes porn and hot girls but refuses to admit his daughter is same age as the girls on screen. He and wife skinny dipped yet refuses to accept his daughter would do same.

Yeah it is part of his character arc; in the beginning struggling with his daughter being grown up, but accepting it in the end. The skinny-dipping with her boyfriend part depicts where the bend starts to take place as he begins to accept that his daughter is growing up.

This is the last novel of a trilogy where in the first novel, the man and his wife adopt the daughter and her brother. It all goes along with this one trilogy theme; because of adoption they feel they did not have enough time with their kids... as kids. At the end of the trilogy, him and his wife realize... they still are a great family despite having adopted the kids at later ages.

But character arcs are great to include in erotica too. A reader wants change within characters, so to have a wife that cannot fathom the idea of bondage, try a little light bondage, then at the end of the book having figured out how to self-stake herself to the back lawn, really shows that change.

 

[Buffy47]

Many people including myself still want to read a good story even though is a erotic one, having a good basis of a story being able to understand the path the characters have taken to end up where they are is important.

It's fiction but a believable one

 

[CuttingEdge]

The length of a novel allows for a lot of that, much more than a short, erotic story, but there are novella's and of course series, that are always popular on here,

I don't do series. I am not against them, just choose not to in my writing career, but have done (2) trilogies. They are challenging because each book must be stand-alone, yet fit into the trilogy. By that I mean, a reader can read any of them out of order and fully understand and appreciate the book, but of course is best if read 1-3.

In my latest one, in which the first two books are done, and I am halfway (60,000 words) through the third, its a bit of a trilogy twist. In the first book the father and mother get together and end up saving and adopting two children who are stowaways from an abusive father. In the second one, the son gets into trouble and the mother ends up going halfway around the world to save the son and his new girlfriend. And in the third, the father ends up saving his daughter and her new boyfriend. So its really a trilogy of a family, with the kids getting older with each novel.

Sadly I work full-time in a non-writing career, often with 70 hour weeks, so I get so little time to write.

 

[Buffy47]

The length of a novel allows for a lot of that, much more than a short, erotic story, but there are novella's and of course series, that are always popular on here,

I don't do series. I am not against them, just choose not to in my writing career, but have done (2) trilogies. They are challenging because each book must be stand-alone, yet fit into the trilogy. By that I mean, a reader can read any of them out of order and fully understand and appreciate the book, but of course is best if read 1-3.

In my latest one, in which the first two books are done, and I am halfway (60,000 words) through the third, its a bit of a trilogy twist. In the first book the father and mother get together and end up saving and adopting two children who are stowaways from an abusive father. In the second one, the son gets into trouble and the mother ends up going halfway around the world to save the son and his new girlfriend. And in the third, the father ends up saving his daughter and her new boyfriend. So its really a trilogy of a family, with the kids getting older with each novel.

Sadly I work full-time in a non-writing career, often with 70 hour weeks, so I get so little time to write.

I have to congratulate you on your hard work writing your two completed and the 60k words you have written for the 3rd part if the trilogy. Its even more special that you find time to be able to not only write but also reply to my comments so I appreciate that because only way I can learn is to question and to understand from the writers point of view...

As you mention the hardest part must be creating continuation but allow the reader to pick up one novel and read it and not fully need the past back story. So there would be some form of adding old background without repeating the storylines

 

[CuttingEdge]

It takes me about 4 months to write a novel, but I also work full-time in the energy sector, which often means 70 hour weeks!

I try to encourage others because when I completed my first novel, it felt like such an accomplishment. So many people want to write a novel, but so few complete it. Yet...I started writing erotic stories for Penthouse and then other online websites, so I started out just like everyone else here. Truly, if I can do it, I know others on here can too.

I have more to say on this, but atlas I must head to work. Stupid electricity and having to be on 24/7/365!!