Amy Sweet
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If you have read, or want to read my novel: Imperfect Beauty, please use this thread to tell me what parts you liked or didn't like. What parts are weak or strong, what parts promise but don't deliever and what parts where better than you could have hoped
YOur imput is very valuable and will be considered as I work through the daunting task of revisions. However, I'm not asking for spelling or grammer corrections at this time. There is no need to correct a spelling if a work or sentance gets cut rearanged or changed anyway. this is alll about reader enjoyment and how the story makes you feel.
It is posted in full under Imperfect Beauty or in chapters under Imperfect. Not all chapters are posted yet (but they are all pending- they should be up and around soon).
My Novel
YOur imput is very valuable and will be considered as I work through the daunting task of revisions. However, I'm not asking for spelling or grammer corrections at this time. There is no need to correct a spelling if a work or sentance gets cut rearanged or changed anyway. this is alll about reader enjoyment and how the story makes you feel.
It is posted in full under Imperfect Beauty or in chapters under Imperfect. Not all chapters are posted yet (but they are all pending- they should be up and around soon).
My Novel
