What are we all writing right now?

[CharlotteKurai]

This the first chapter I am writing, and is in spanish because i want to have more flavor on the plot. I'm so happy to upload my prologue on Literotica .

I just want to need a editor or someone to help me to my grammatical error.

 

[ChuckWolf]

Aren't you one of the ones who always suggests write the story that it wants to be?

The only real difference (for me personally as well as the averages) is that E&V gets a lot more views. But it sucks for engagement rates, so you get about as many comments in SF&F. You seem really gun shy about SF&F, so maybe that's not your experience. I know I personally don't care for your swords and sorcery stories (the only writing of yours I don't), but love your E&V stories, so maybe your experience is what you write in each. As an experiment, try writing the story as if it's in E&V, then submit it in SF&F. I think you might be surprised. Unless the views really are what you are after.

Didn't have a great reaction in SF&F and have had mixed results in E&V.

I might experiment and post future stories in Fetish, which seems like a good catch-all category.

However, any stories with R/NC stuff will just go into that category.

I might do a deep-dive into story tags and see which ones (that apply) would be optimal.

 

[Bamagan]

I can count to ten. Eleven, if I have my hands in my pockets and it's not too cold.

So... 10.2 this time of year?

 

[LunaJupiter]

I'm working on a much longer and (hopefully) much better chapter of The Naked Hiking Club. When I started this story, the first chapter was almost proof of concept and I was halfway through before I decided who my main viewpoint character would be. The second chapter was when I settled in to what the club character's personalities were going to be.

The third chapter finally opened the door to some dynamism in Bella's (the MC, "our heroine" as I refer to her when I break the fourth wall) development - as they say, a good story grows in the telling - and I'm working hard to balance Bella's growth with the promise implicit in the title: hot young people getting it on in nature.

It's a bit of a challenge - I don't want to break the club up, I want them to love each other throughout the series, but Bella is going to need quite a bit of solo time to take part in all the adventures I've got swimming around in my head and to become the woman I know she can become. But I'm enjoying the challenge.

 

[SadieGirl06]

An honest to goodness love letter to Marcus

 

[DeMont]

Well, one pun deserves another, but I can't think of one either.

@MillieDynamite,
What about,
"If you're ina Roma ana you wanna have wilda sex justa calla Mari!"

**Ouch**
Respectfully, did I just type that?
D.

 

[Husky_Embrace]

I'm working on a much longer and (hopefully) much better chapter of The Naked Hiking Club. When I started this story, the first chapter was almost proof of concept and I was halfway through before I decided who my main viewpoint character would be. The second chapter was when I settled in to what the club character's personalities were going to be.

The third chapter finally opened the door to some dynamism in Bella's (the MC, "our heroine" as I refer to her when I break the fourth wall) development - as they say, a good story grows in the telling - and I'm working hard to balance Bella's growth with the promise implicit in the title: hot young people getting it on in nature.

It's a bit of a challenge - I don't want to break the club up, I want them to love each other throughout the series, but Bella is going to need quite a bit of solo time to take part in all the adventures I've got swimming around in my head and to become the woman I know she can become. But I'm enjoying the challenge.

Not to throw it all in disarray, but do you need to have a perspective fully dominant from Belle? You could also have a few interwoven perspectives. Belle can still be the MC and the dominant perspective. The rest is just has higher screen time, like whole chapters.

This prevents you to have her included in all action. If Belle is in all the action, it'll feel less like she's shoehorned into every scene, as we've had someone else's perspective. It might make it easier on you as well as the reader overall.

 

[LunaJupiter]

Not to throw it all in disarray, but do you need to have a perspective fully dominant from Belle? You could also have a few interwoven perspectives. Belle can still be the MC and the dominant perspective. The rest is just has higher screen time, like whole chapters.

This prevents you to have her included in all action. If Belle is in all the action, it'll feel less like she's shoehorned into every scene, as we've had someone else's perspective. It might make it easier on you as well as the reader overall.

Well, it's not that she'd be shoehorned into all the scenes so much as it's *her* story that I want to tell. Bella is, herself, struggling with this in the narrative - she wants to have her cake (stay with the club) and eat it, too (explore her kinks with partners not in the club). My goal as her creator is to allow her to actually do that, and do it convincingly and true to character - it's the primary fantasy I want to present to my readers. It won't be any easier for her than it is for me lol.

Multiple perspectives, at least the way I write, would quickly become an overwhelming project. The threads would increase exponentially and tying them together effectively would be beyond my skill as a writer. I do my humble best, but I'm not William Faulkner. Thanks so much for your insight, though! No joke I'm deeply grateful for any interaction with my fiction.

 

[CharlotteKurai]

This still I am forwarding as fast I could. I wish could write more fluid in english.

 

[onehitwanda]

I am a sucker for someone who not only gets my sense of humor but loves me even more because of it

. someone who doesn't want to change and censor my many personalities..but loves me more for them..
And who loves dogs

/r/lostliterator

 

[kathyisgr65]

Idk what happened other than sleep posting..night

 

[al55]

I'm writing a story about a woman who is surgically transformed into a large breasted giant fungus what is wrong with me?

 

[MillieDynamite]

Words in chat windows on the forum. It is similar to the butler in the dining room, with a candlestick.

 

[StillStunned]

It is similar to the butler in the dining room, with a candlestick.

I think I read that one. It's in Fetish, isn't it? Or was it BDSM?

 

[SomaSlave]

I think I read that one. It's in Fetish, isn't it? Or was it BDSM?

I believe it was Noncon/Reluctant

 

[SomaSlave]

I'm writing a story about a woman who is surgically transformed into a large breasted giant fungus what is wrong with me?

“Attack of the Mushroom People” meets “The Lobster”?

 

[Erozetta]

I've been on a roll cleaning up my older works that were published here for release elsewhere.

New writing is currently on hold as I continue playing through Bloodlines II.

 

[MillieDynamite]

It was in the bedroom, by Mrs. Peacock, with a rope.

I think I read that one. It's in Fetish, isn't it? Or was it BDSM?

 

[SomaSlave]

I’m currently struggling through what was supposed to be a simple epilogue to “Masters’ Night In" to set the stage for “Roissy Nights.” However, it’s turning into a lot more relationship development and hints of bigger news to come down the road. On the bright side, it’s given me an opportunity to start fleshing out the end game for Galatea and her Masters, as well as set the stage for at least four more stories in the series.

The challenge at the moment is not to rush the characters in their emotional attachment to each other: there’s a natural conflict between the excitement of finally discovering oneself, including an unexpected and decidedly unconventional love, and the reality that the participants are mostly in their 50s and 60s and dealing with first love at that stage in life. It’s a balancing act to keep the story going while keeping it in the realm of possibility.

 

[Writer61]

Just started the fifth part of a new series. The first four are in draft, waiting for the last three of the previous series to be approved.

So that is seven in the pipeline. A bit frustrated by the ongoing delays.

 

[SomaSlave]

It was in the bedroom, by Mrs. Peacock, with a rope.

Definitely BDSM, and I would read that in a heartbeat.

 

[MillieDynamite]

Colonel Mustard, in the drawing room, with a monkey wrench.

Definitely BDSM, and I would read that in a heartbeat.

 

[Writer61]

Colonel Mustard, in the drawing room, with a monkey wrench.

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The Drawing Room?
That looks like The Library.

 

[MillieDynamite]

It was, my goof. Miss Scarlet, with the revolver, in the hall, after striking Colonel Mustard in the face.

 

[StillStunned]

Colonel Mustard, in the drawing room, with a monkey wrench.

A monkey wrench is a great tool for beating off monkeys.

I can't believe that it's taken more than 60 pages for this thread to derail.