Virtual Reality: an idea/recruitment

[Darkniciad]

At least y'all aren't trying to edit 400k+ words and write on the sequel to it -- with a houseguest limiting your writing time *laugh* I've already had to ask Red to push me back on schedule, because there's no way I can handle leaping into a new storyline right now.

I still haven't written a single word on the new VR. The whole story is in my head, but I have things I need to get finished in the meantime.

 

[Trombonus]

At least y'all aren't trying to edit 400k+ words and write on the sequel to it -- with a houseguest limiting your writing time *laugh* I've already had to ask Red to push me back on schedule, because there's no way I can handle leaping into a new storyline right now.

I still haven't written a single word on the new VR. The whole story is in my head, but I have things I need to get finished in the meantime.

No worries, just get it in when you can. I'm pretty swamped myself.

 

[deathlynx]

Well, last night I finished my Pokemon Diamond/Pearl story and did a full edit of Mrs' Soul Calibur piece! So that's two that are almost ready for the que!

 

[deathlynx]

Okay...so I have a question to ask...My Pokemon story ended up at 23 Word pages long (4 lit pages or so)...So my question to all is should I break it up into two chapters? There's a nice break point about halfway through and both chapters would even have erotic content...Also, no big surprise, there's plenty of room for future instalments whichever way I go with it...so what does everyone think? 1 big story or 2 more manageable reads?

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

Okay...so I have a question to ask...My Pokemon story ended up at 23 Word pages long (4 lit pages or so)...So my question to all is should I break it up into two chapters? There's a nice break point about halfway through and both chapters would even have erotic content...Also, no big surprise, there's plenty of room for future instalments whichever way I go with it...so what does everyone think? 1 big story or 2 more manageable reads?

From what you told me about it I think it can be split, may be easier on the readers that way.

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

I'm done mine, at least I think I am done with the edit, will find out in about ten minutes, lol.

What should I call it so that it's recognized as part of the chain...?

 

[Trombonus]

I think 4 pages is fine. It's up to you though

Mrs. DL: The format we've been using for titles is Virtual Reality: *game name*

 

[Just-Legal]

*wave*

Midway through my WoW fic. I seem to be attempting to hit every Lit category without trying. *laughs*

 

[Just-Legal]

eek, I have no idea what the heck happened there... my post appeared mid-thread...

 

[deathlynx]

And don't forget to put the standard Celebrity disclaimer at the begining of the story...thumb back a few pages in this thread and you'll find a couple good ones...

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

Might not even post it *shrugs*

 

[deathlynx]

Might not even post it *shrugs*

I think you shoul, it's very good...And quite hot...It's a wonderful addition to the chain!

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

I'm going to have hubby help me submit mine tonight. *crosses fingers that it gets approved*

 

[Trombonus]

I'm going to have hubby help me submit mine tonight. *crosses fingers that it gets approved*

Yay. I'm sure it will.

 

[Just-Legal]

Yep. I broke the thread >.<

Reiterating my "midway through fic" notice

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

I submitted today.

 

[deathlynx]

Woohoo! Pokemon Diamond/Pearl is now in the cue! I ended up breaking it down into two chapters becaue who knows, there may very well be further stories to it!

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

It got approved, I now have my second story posted

 

[Trombonus]

Thanks Mrs. DL, and my list has been updated with your story. Links in the sig.

 

[deathlynx]

Grrr! Over a week and no sign of Pokemon D/P yet...*sigh* Just my luck really...

 

[deathlynx]

Virtual Realities: Pokemon D/P Ch. 1 is out! Chapter 2 is still pending, but I expect it'll appear tomorrow...

 

[flavortang]

I'd challenge the female vampire Rayne from Bloodrayne to a pillow fight. Then I'd asked her to dress up in leather and throw me around the bedroom while I cried like a schoolgirl. All in all, a pretty cool little fantasy.

Then I'd wear a Dracula cape and ride her until dawn.

 

[deathlynx]

I'd challenge the female vampire Rayne from Bloodrayne to a pillow fight. Then I'd asked her to dress up in leather and throw me around the bedroom while I cried like a schoolgirl. All in all, a pretty cool little fantasy.

Then I'd wear a Dracula cape and ride her until dawn.

So? Sounds like a great story...why not write it out in full?

 

[flavortang]

So? Sounds like a great story...why not write it out in full?

I know, huh? lol I actually did have a story in mind about a freelance writer who gets seduced by a woman who works in an occult bookstore who turns out to be a vampire.

Love almost any vampire stuff.

 

[MrsDeathlynx]

DL's second chapter of Pokemon got put up, here it is...
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=314735